Comment from giraffmang

Exceptional

Oh no, poor Mildred... but wait and see...

wringing it like an old dish-cloth - dishcloth could be a single word here.

lol, I knew it. Super ending to this instalment. Should prove fun for the final in the trilogy.

excellent stuff.
G

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thank you so very, very much, Gareth, I have really appreciated all your helpful reviews. This six stars from you has totally made my day. I'm so pleased you liked the ending. You're right, I'm going to have a lot of fun with the next book! Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Mustang Patty

Exceptional

Hi, Sandra;

Such a lovely way to end the story. I can't wait to see the adventures these two time-travelers will have together.

I'm sad to see the end to this enjoyable storyline, but I know you will have something new soon.

patty

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thank you so much for the 6 stars, my dear friend! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my ending. I'm going to have some fun with these two in the next book. Can you just imagine our Mildred? Oh Lordy, no! LOL. The new book will begin soon. Thank you for all your lovely reviews, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

I'm sooooo glad my new laptop arrived in time so I could do this chapter justice. My spare keyboard has been on the blink, so reviewing has been a nightmare.
This ending was perfect. First you push us all to the depth of despair when you realistically portray a woman devistated with grief, and then you fill us with happiness with Mildred's revival.

I bet we would all like to revive ourselves back to our early thirties - so clever, and a perfect ending.

I can't wait to start reading the third book, and look forward to buying the second. This would make such a wonderful TV series. Well done!

Alexis xxx

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

What a fabulous review, Alexis, thank you so very much!!! I'm so pleased you liked this ending. I couldn't let Mildred go, she's too important, and such a lovely lady. The readers would have been really cross with me if I'd killed her off permanently. LOL Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

I knew Mildred would die, but you turned it all around and brought her back to some sort of life so she will still be in the story. Brilliant! Best of all, she'll travel with Veronica... yay! :)

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Bless your heart, thank you so much for the 6 stars!!! I couldn't let Mildred go, but she was getting too old, so this worked out well. That is the joy of fantasy and time travel, I can almost do what I want with my character. I'm over the moon you liked it, my friend. Big hugs :)) Sandra xxxx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

This was absolutely incredible Sandra. I love the idea of Mildred helping Veronica when she goes time traveling again.
Who will we have watching the children? Great book Sandra. You will be famous for these stories. Hugs Nancy

'Oh Lordy, Miss[v]eronica, nuff of that.' (need's a capital.)

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

I'm glad you liked it, Nancy. Thank you so very much for the lovely review and all the stars. I think the PTB will bring them back at the same instant they leave, just like in this book, so the children won't miss their mother and Mildred. Thank you for spotting that mistake, my friend. Big hugs Sandra xxxx

reply by nancy_e_davis on 15-May-2018

Are you saying Mildred will be in the flesh? I thought she was a spirit.

reply by nancy_e_davis on 15-May-2018

Are you saying Mildred will be in the flesh? I thought she was a spirit.

reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Absolutely! The powers have powers that we don't know about, yet! It's such fun writing in fantasy, anything is possible. :)) And, don't forget, no one knew about Mildred before Veronica went back the first time, why was that? What had she done before? Did she even exist? Just a few little clues for you. :)) xxxx

reply by nancy_e_davis on 15-May-2018

Okay! I just missed it I guess. LOL write on. Well done!

Comment from dginnh

Exceptional

That was a great last chapter, having only read the last two. In your reply you said you had received death threats if you killed off Mildred's character. And wham, first thing I read "I don't know how long I stood there looking down at Mildred as she lay in the white, satin-lined coffin". I thought you like living dangerously :), and then "I could see plainly it was Mildred ... but she was much younger." What a great cliff-hanger, but then I have to remember that this story involves time travel, so anything is possible. I hope your fans forgive you. Dave

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

LOL, I hope they will too. Time-travel, and fantasy allows us to do what we want, so much nicer. I'm going to have a lot of fun in the next book with these two. :)) Thank you so very much for the 6 lovely stars, Dave, and your fabulous review. That was so nice of you! I hope you will read the next book when I start it. Big hugs Sandra xx

Comment from JC Shurburtt

Excellent

Beautiful prose in this very somber final chapter. I love the line "how come some women look so beautiful when they cry" it made me feel like the character was being comforted. You paint such a great picture of the moment and realistically portray how time moves so fast when we say our final goodbyes to loved ones. Excellent.

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm really glad you enjoyed my final part in this book. I hope you'll be here for the third in the series. :)) Warm hugs, Sandra xxx

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

superb writing, Sandra. I really enjoyed reading your story and I like the ending. a guardian angel in life becomes a real guardian angel For life........great....meeshu

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Aww, thank you, Meeshu, for your lovely review. I'm so glad you enjoyed my ending. I'll get the next book started soon. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from aryr

Exceptional

What a fantastic chapter Sandra, one could actually feel the anguish and sorrow that Veronica was feeling. You provided great details regarding how Mildred looked both in the coffin and later when she returned to advise Veronica that she would be her travel partner. That by the way was a fantastic touch from the 'powers to be'. Initially there was such sadness then there was immense joy. A great chapter of emotions and closure. Very well done. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, my friend. A great book, I look forward to number three. Smiles and big hugs.

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thank you so very much, Ali, for your terrific review and all the lovely stars! I'm so pleased you liked the ending. I was a bit nervous. :)) Book three will be fun to write with Mildred going along. lol. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by aryr on 16-May-2018

Sandra you are so welcome, the next book sounds so interesting. I will be patient.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Exceptional

Great ending. So glad Mildred will be with Veronica and she didn't really have to say good-bye. I'll have to buy the book when it is out. Really great writing. I'll mess it but know there is a third book coming so can read on. xxx Rox

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars. Rox! And the fabulous review. I'm so pleased you liked my ending! Yes, I'm got to do a bit of editing, and then get it published. Then it's book 3!! :) Big hugs ,my friend. :) xxxx