Haiku (dry autumn leaves crunch)
Haiku 5-7-532 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I like this piece. You've got the traditional haiku syllable count, seasonal references, the satori. All good. The commentary aspect is well realised too.
very nice piece.
GMG
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Hi there,
I like this piece. You've got the traditional haiku syllable count, seasonal references, the satori. All good. The commentary aspect is well realised too.
very nice piece.
GMG
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Giraffmang, thank you so much for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your comments were very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a beautiful haiku. The crunching leaves gave a sound to this short poem. You did a good job crafting this and picking the right artwork too. Well done.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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This is a beautiful haiku. The crunching leaves gave a sound to this short poem. You did a good job crafting this and picking the right artwork too. Well done.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Sugarray, thank you for your thoughtful review on my haiku. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
