Dreams Of Freedom
Two slaves are separated. A man dreams of his love and home.34 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
One of the best poems I've read. Definitely deserves six stars. You handled the subject matter superbly. Good luck on the Black and White contest. Well done!
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One of the best poems I've read. Definitely deserves six stars. You handled the subject matter superbly. Good luck on the Black and White contest. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful colourful write which is meloncholy and quite sad but also uplifting with dreams of laughter and freedom, a joy to read, best wishes for Christmas, love Dolly x
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A beautiful colourful write which is meloncholy and quite sad but also uplifting with dreams of laughter and freedom, a joy to read, best wishes for Christmas, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks of distinction of freedom of slaves - dreams of his love and dreams of his home and there would be the best of courses of living; I like. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks of distinction of freedom of slaves - dreams of his love and dreams of his home and there would be the best of courses of living; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a passionate love black and white for contest entry prompt well-written rich and seem as well as imagery of flowed well read well I know grammar issues as well ejective content was perfect objective content and adjective content aligned to Huntley to ship the measures were in place thanks for this and good luck dr. Ricky 1024
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This is a passionate love black and white for contest entry prompt well-written rich and seem as well as imagery of flowed well read well I know grammar issues as well ejective content was perfect objective content and adjective content aligned to Huntley to ship the measures were in place thanks for this and good luck dr. Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
