This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "The Wedding"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from pbomar1115
For a minute, I thought you were going to leave me hanging on about Gwendoly marriage. You introduce the problem, then have the reader engrossed in facts leading to the problem. You do it well with interesting details.
Phillip
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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For a minute, I thought you were going to leave me hanging on about Gwendoly marriage. You introduce the problem, then have the reader engrossed in facts leading to the problem. You do it well with interesting details.
Phillip
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much, Phillip, for the lovely review and for the shiny 6 stars!! No, I wasn't going to leave you hanging in the church, but Gwendolyn has now got to face her brother... How will she handle that? Thank you again, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra. xxx
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There is a lot of interesting things going on.
Phillip
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Another good chapter.
The story is well written and interesting..
It is easy to follow as the events unfold.
And the picture is truly beautiful.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Another good chapter.
The story is well written and interesting..
It is easy to follow as the events unfold.
And the picture is truly beautiful.
Sharon
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your continued support, Sharon, I'm delighted you are still enjoying my story! Big hugs, my friend. :) sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is such a wonderful read I didn't notice the length. I loved every word. You are doing a wonderful job writing this. Thank you for sharing.
because he had a biblical look about him.' (good description)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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This is such a wonderful read I didn't notice the length. I loved every word. You are doing a wonderful job writing this. Thank you for sharing.
because he had a biblical look about him.' (good description)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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What a wonderful review from one of my favourite authors, thank you so very much, Barbara! The six stars are the cherry on top of the cake! Thank you, I have the biggest smile on my face. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ben Colder
I know the feeling about not finding a place to stop. when it flows it flows! Love some of your dialect. I learned something. Thanks Sandy. Your work is always inviting.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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I know the feeling about not finding a place to stop. when it flows it flows! Love some of your dialect. I learned something. Thanks Sandy. Your work is always inviting.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Hi, Ben! How is your manuscript doing? I want you to tell me when I can buy it. :) Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, my dear friend. I really do appreciate them. I hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving with all your family. Biggest hugs, dear friend. :) Sandy. xxxx
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Hopefully sometimes in the spring of 18. Working on the sequel. Reading your work gave me an idea. Thanks much.
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That sounds interesting!! You'll have to tell me one day. :)) xxx
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nicely done, Sandra! I enjoyed this part of the story. It explains a bit of what is going on, and now, I can't wait to find out the rest.
Once inside, I looked at all the people who were now stood up and waiting for me to walk down the aisle. --Maybe standing?
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Nicely done, Sandra! I enjoyed this part of the story. It explains a bit of what is going on, and now, I can't wait to find out the rest.
Once inside, I looked at all the people who were now stood up and waiting for me to walk down the aisle. --Maybe standing?
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Aww, thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, Russell. That is so nice of you. I'll take a look at your suggestion now, thank you for showing such a nice interest in my story, you are so kind. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
'Jacob was born with red eyes and a full head of white hair, just like Francis. This obviously frightened his parents, because apparently, they left him on the steps of the missionary church one night, shortly after his birth. ' This happened to so many children born with this condition. They are still often ostracised but a few have even made it in the modelling world. I cannot believe the quality of your writing your interactions are particularly strong. I love your writing and intend to keep reading your fabulous story with interest. warmest regards Meia xx
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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'Jacob was born with red eyes and a full head of white hair, just like Francis. This obviously frightened his parents, because apparently, they left him on the steps of the missionary church one night, shortly after his birth. ' This happened to so many children born with this condition. They are still often ostracised but a few have even made it in the modelling world. I cannot believe the quality of your writing your interactions are particularly strong. I love your writing and intend to keep reading your fabulous story with interest. warmest regards Meia xx
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thank you so very much, Meia, for your lovely review. In all the research I've been doing regarding albinos, they do indeed still suffer from the ignorance of others. It's such a shame. I'm really pleased you are enjoying my story, thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xxxx