Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

This is a good chapter, Sandra. The ladies do have a problem. What can they do to save Francis? Poor little baby, an innocent in danger because of the superstitious ignorance of Sir John.
One suggestion, you need to change the spelling of Francis in the list of characters.You say you have not been well, I hope it is nothing serious. XXX Nancy

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you so much, dear Nancy! The six stars have kissed me better! :) I had the flu injection and I've been really rough with it. My breathing went haywire, so bad I've been living on my inhalers and steroids. It happened last year, but I forgot, I've been told by everyone else how bad I was. I won't forget next time. I remember my dear mum had terrible reactions too, and stopped having them even though she had emphysema. It's easing a bit now, thank goodness. Thanks for your lovely review, my friend and for picking up the error in the name. I've made the corrections now. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx

reply by nancy_e_davis on 06-Nov-2017

Remember my daughter Nancy Jean had a bout of
Guillian Bere' Syndrone (GBS) that nearly killed her last year? It took her months to get over it and her feet have continued to hurt to this day. I am afraid to get a shot now. We all are after seeing what happened to her. Hope u are better. Hugs.

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

I do remember that! You were so worried about her. Yes, that has definitely made my mind up, as soon as my 2018 calendar comes, I'll go straight to the end of October and make a note not to have the jab! xxxx

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Exceptional

The expression on Gwendolyn's face seemed to confirm what I was thinking. 'He would never do that. He must have found a way to get rid of him....' Oh my goodness I am HOOKED to this story, I have bookmarked it, I love the idea of a future traveller helping a ghost...all sorts of things to do with time and time slips fascinate me...this is amazing...please don't stop writing I am DYING (!) to read more. The pencil picture you included is very beautiful. It really caught my eye. Love Meia xx

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

What an amazing review, Meia, thank you so much, but please don't DIE on me, unless you go and give Veronica a hand!! LOL. Thank you for the lovely six stars, my friend and for bookmarking it. Big hugs, Sandra :) xx

Comment from apky

Excellent

Sorry to hear you haven't been well lately, Sandra. But also very glad that you well now and back to give us your wonderful story. I'd missed Veronica and her busy-ness.

This was another excellent and entertaining chapter. I sincerely hope that both Veronica and Gwendolyn come to some sort of solution that would work for all concerned.

Can't wait for the next post.

Gwendolyne(or Gwendolyn; best keep the spelling constant.) didn't look convinced.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you for catching that added 'e' my friend, my fingers try to tell my brain how to spell sometimes! lol. I've corrected that now. This part went on for too long so I've split it. The rest of this part will be posted soon. :) Thank you for the lovely review my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Sandra;
Another well-written chapter in this ongoing story. I do hope they can find out what happened to poor Francis. There are so many horror stories of what happened to albino children. I find it interesting that Veronica can converse with a ghost. Looking forward to more,
~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you, Patty. In her out of body form, she is able to see and converse with ghosts. It's nothing new to her, she was doing it all the time in the first book. I think I'd be quite spooked! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xx

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

You are a tease here, toying with Francis' father's identity to simply put it off...lol

Can you tell me who his father's is - father is.



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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you, G! I've corrected, father's, I didn't go to SpecSavers!! Yes, I do love to tease, lol, especially when I can get away with it. You MIGHT find out his name in the next part coming soon. :) Sandra xxxx

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Sandra,

Though I haven't been following this story perfectly, I was still able to jump into this chapter and understand exactly what's been going on. Great job on that.

Some notes:
1.) Her eyes strayed over to Francis and I watched
--> 'over' is not needed

2.) very much alive in my own time(,)' I told her.

Thanks!



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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017

Thank you so much, Robyn. I think it's just the way we English say it, 'over to ...' but thanks for finding the comma error, I've put that right now. :) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx