This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "A Family Chat"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Curly Girly
Hi, Sandra.
In this chapter, you refer to reading the child a story from Casper the Caterpillar. Naturally, nearly everyone has heard of him. But seeing this is in modern times, why not substitute that old book title with one of your own kids' book titles? It would be a smart marketing move--why let the opportunity go? You decide.
In this chapter, we realise they sure have a problem to sort out. And at this stage, the solution, if any, remains unclear. Hopefully, they'll find a way.
Nicole
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Hi, Sandra.
In this chapter, you refer to reading the child a story from Casper the Caterpillar. Naturally, nearly everyone has heard of him. But seeing this is in modern times, why not substitute that old book title with one of your own kids' book titles? It would be a smart marketing move--why let the opportunity go? You decide.
In this chapter, we realise they sure have a problem to sort out. And at this stage, the solution, if any, remains unclear. Hopefully, they'll find a way.
Nicole
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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I never thought of that, Nicole. What a clever lady you are. I'll do that. Thank you so much, my friend. The powers that be will be coming in the next part. Big hugs. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh you are so right, it is time for a little explaining from the higher powers to make sense of this and to right the misunderstanding and help with the little boy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Oh you are so right, it is time for a little explaining from the higher powers to make sense of this and to right the misunderstanding and help with the little boy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Watch ut for the next part, Barb. :)) Veronica is going mad, and so it Joe from the sound of it. Yes, some explaining is due! Thank you, my friend. I'm so pleased you have patiently waited. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from pbomar1115
Mildred learning Joe's identity reveal clearly that he is Michael. Joe's bent for the light switch over candles is the clue. And Veronica's ability to go back and forth in time is believed to be the work of something or someone who has the control. She does not believe it happens undirected.
Phillip
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Mildred learning Joe's identity reveal clearly that he is Michael. Joe's bent for the light switch over candles is the clue. And Veronica's ability to go back and forth in time is believed to be the work of something or someone who has the control. She does not believe it happens undirected.
Phillip
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much, Phillip, for this lovely review. I'm so pleased you are enjoying it. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You are certainly welcome, Sandra.
Phillip
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Perhaps the person just needs to want to return to their own time in order to do it. Joe has been sidetracked with the chocolate and the electric lights. Where have I been? I don't remember any "Powers that be" before this. Duh! Mildred reminds me of one of my sister-in-laws. Sweet and kind. LOL Good job Sandra. Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Perhaps the person just needs to want to return to their own time in order to do it. Joe has been sidetracked with the chocolate and the electric lights. Where have I been? I don't remember any "Powers that be" before this. Duh! Mildred reminds me of one of my sister-in-laws. Sweet and kind. LOL Good job Sandra. Nancy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Veronica has always called them the powers that be, because she didn't know, and still doesn't know who or what is manipulating her time travelling. In fact, there is such a group, four 'entities' The Committee, that are watching all she is doing. They have been mentioned at the beginning of every chapter, which is every 6th part. But they will be appearing earlier this time, at the beginning of the next part. That's when things will really happen. Your sister-in-law also can boast at having a sister-in-law like MIldred. :)) Thank you, my dear friend, for your lovely review. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx
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I guess I just dismissed it as un-important to the story line. I do read every word. LOL Not like some reviews where you know they didn't read but a few lines. Sorry gal. I know now. Powrwes that be. HAHAHA
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LOL! Nancy, you do make me laugh! You are so funny, but lovely with it! xxxxx
Comment from JDRBAR
And, this wonderful story continues. There is nothing to correct or even suggest. It's a spellbinding story that definitely keeps me waiting for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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And, this wonderful story continues. There is nothing to correct or even suggest. It's a spellbinding story that definitely keeps me waiting for the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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aww, thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! You've quite made my day! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Possummagic
This is a great story and I'm really getting into it now. The cast is not too high to keep track of who is who and what they are doing. My favourite part:
" I thought back to all the times I time travelled and occupied Mrs Humphries' and Alice's body, I flopped in James's arms and sighed. "I've always said it was the powers that be who controlled my time travelling--whoever they are. But that was because I had nothing, or anyone else to put the blame on. I don't really know if they even exist. If they do, they'd better bloody well come and sort this out!" PM
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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This is a great story and I'm really getting into it now. The cast is not too high to keep track of who is who and what they are doing. My favourite part:
" I thought back to all the times I time travelled and occupied Mrs Humphries' and Alice's body, I flopped in James's arms and sighed. "I've always said it was the powers that be who controlled my time travelling--whoever they are. But that was because I had nothing, or anyone else to put the blame on. I don't really know if they even exist. If they do, they'd better bloody well come and sort this out!" PM
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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I'm sooo pleased!! Thank you so much, that is a most encouraging review and I really appreciate it. Thank you! You're so kind. :) Sandra xxxx
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You are most welcome. PM
Comment from aryr
Woohoah, Sandra, I think Veronica is just a tad bit agitated. I can understand her frustration being that both her son and daughter have been affected by 'the powers to be'. And poor Mildred, what a shock to hear Joe's voice coming from little Michael. At least the three adults seem to agree on the possibilities that created this event. It was a n interesting chapter that seemed to catch one's attention and hold onto it. Very well done, thanks my friend.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Woohoah, Sandra, I think Veronica is just a tad bit agitated. I can understand her frustration being that both her son and daughter have been affected by 'the powers to be'. And poor Mildred, what a shock to hear Joe's voice coming from little Michael. At least the three adults seem to agree on the possibilities that created this event. It was a n interesting chapter that seemed to catch one's attention and hold onto it. Very well done, thanks my friend.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Alie, and the wonderful review. That is so nice of you. Things will start happening from now on!! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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Most welcome, Sandra, big hugs back at you.
Comment from damommy
Will the powers that be ever tell us the reason for this time travel? There must be one. What could be a reason for Joe to be in a little boy? Very thought provoking.
Michael seems to be totally unaware of his predicament. That's good. Otherwise would be too terrible to think about.
Great as always. I'm giving a six because I know you'll make corrections.
-At least we know the[] how, and we know the[] why
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Will the powers that be ever tell us the reason for this time travel? There must be one. What could be a reason for Joe to be in a little boy? Very thought provoking.
Michael seems to be totally unaware of his predicament. That's good. Otherwise would be too terrible to think about.
Great as always. I'm giving a six because I know you'll make corrections.
-At least we know the[] how, and we know the[] why
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Oh, thank you so much for catching those Yvonne. Yes, I've corrected them. Bless your heart, my friend. The next part brings the powers that be back, and you will discover what they are about. Thank you, my dear friend, for the six stars, and wonderful review. You are my first reviewer and you gave me a 6! I've a huge smile on my face! Big hugs, my friend. xx Sandra
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Glad to make you smile. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Don't let it end too soon. 8-)
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No, there is so much coming, it will be a while before I come to the end. You are so nice, my friend. xx