Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend this is very well written I think Michael has been here before in a previous life I wonder what veronica will do next I enjoyed very well done again I look forward to the next chapter regards Jill

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thank you so much, Jill, for another of your lovely reviews. Everyone has given me their thoughts as to how Michael might know about the fire. But are they right?? Hmm, we'll find out in the next couple of parts. :)) Big hugs, my friend! Sandra xxx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Ah we have a small prophet in Michael, and why not, A small child is more likely to be receptive to receiving messages than we are. So there is something to research a fire. I loved the interaction with Veronica's and James' children, it brings back memories, plus the new ones with grands now. Well done, Sandra, excellent scribing, blessings,, Roy

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Children are great to draw on for imagery and ideas, they have such wonderful imaginations. We'll find out about Michael soon. Thank you so much, Roy, for this lovely review. I really appreciate it. Big hugs and much love, my friend. :) Sandra xx

reply by royowen on 04-Aug-2017

Love back ya dear Sandra,

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Ann and Michael ran into the sitting room screaming the place down and driving me to distraction. "Mummy's right. You'll have to wait until you're a big boy before you can drink alcohol, you little scallywag (:P)."

Have a good weekend!

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thank you so much, Rasmine, for reading this part! :) Sandra xx

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

I'm going to be an angel in the nativity play(,)"

Another excellent chapter, Sandra.

I like how you add descriptions that help imagine the settings.

Nice story, too!

Drew xx

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thank you so much, Drew. The descriptions and imagery offer many clues in this part and part 8 as to what is going on, but most won't realise this until they read the next couple of parts. :)) I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story, thank you! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Ha-ha! What's good for adults is also good for children. They are young adults. Teaching by example is best. Being an adult with young kids is tough!...
"Michael! What do you think you're doing? That's daddy's drink, and it's not for little boys!"
The mystery of why the couple died so young, in their 50s, has been resolved. Michael said it was the fire. Perhaps the butterfly imparted this knowledge?

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

I remembered my son when he was three years old going around all the tables at my brother's wedding and picking up peoples' wine glasses and taking a sip. He slept well that night! Everyone thought it funny, but really, it wasn't.

Thanks, Nicole, You'll soon be getting some answers. :) Sandra xxx