Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Senryu (steps in the hallway)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from DR DIP
Its not hard to see where you are coming from with this Haiku In just 3 lines it says so much. A child terrified of her Dad for possible sexual abuse of just abuse in general mentally and physically. Well done.
dip
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Its not hard to see where you are coming from with this Haiku In just 3 lines it says so much. A child terrified of her Dad for possible sexual abuse of just abuse in general mentally and physically. Well done.
dip
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review, Dr dipp
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Guapa, this is a startling haiku, telling a whole story in so few words. The fright the little girl goes through to that monster of a father. Seriously good. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Wow, Guapa, this is a startling haiku, telling a whole story in so few words. The fright the little girl goes through to that monster of a father. Seriously good. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
