The Easy Way
There is more than one way to hide eggs38 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You certainly made me smile with these fun words, your chicken was named Cluck? How cute. I wish you cluck, I mean luck with the competition, love Dolly x
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You certainly made me smile with these fun words, your chicken was named Cluck? How cute. I wish you cluck, I mean luck with the competition, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! I love the artwork! Is that yours? This totally explains why the Easter Bunny brings eggs. He has a chicken. But is it a chocolate chicken? Thanks for the fun.
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Lol! I love the artwork! Is that yours? This totally explains why the Easter Bunny brings eggs. He has a chicken. But is it a chocolate chicken? Thanks for the fun.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
You might want to have a look at your description line. Grammatically it is off. It should read 'There is more than one way to hide eggs'.
I liked this one, it is pretty amusing. I would suggest though using some commas in that final line.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
You might want to have a look at your description line. Grammatically it is off. It should read 'There is more than one way to hide eggs'.
I liked this one, it is pretty amusing. I would suggest though using some commas in that final line.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I liked and enjoyed this Just for Fun Haiku for its event and scenic portrayal, chicken's act for hiding eggs by screeching, good imagery and thoughts flown; it was a pleasant wild read.
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I liked and enjoyed this Just for Fun Haiku for its event and scenic portrayal, chicken's act for hiding eggs by screeching, good imagery and thoughts flown; it was a pleasant wild read.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fun 5-7-5 which made me snigger, although I really shouldn't. I can't help myself. Your last line is silly and makes me smile like the punchline of a joke:
"Drop squawk drop squawk drop."
Now, that's one way to hide Easter eggs.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
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This is a fun 5-7-5 which made me snigger, although I really shouldn't. I can't help myself. Your last line is silly and makes me smile like the punchline of a joke:
"Drop squawk drop squawk drop."
Now, that's one way to hide Easter eggs.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from moonsunrise
Very creative poem. The very well done imagery is adorable and perfect!
Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it!
Well done!
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Very creative poem. The very well done imagery is adorable and perfect!
Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it!
Well done!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from writeapoem
I don't just suggest your 575 is passes the test. I think it is the best. It has humor surpasses a sense of humor makes for good rumor. Its funny a big bunny hides it eggs by walking its chicken legs dropping squawk from a delightful flock. I trust you will win.
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I don't just suggest your 575 is passes the test. I think it is the best. It has humor surpasses a sense of humor makes for good rumor. Its funny a big bunny hides it eggs by walking its chicken legs dropping squawk from a delightful flock. I trust you will win.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very funny contest entry. Where can I get one of these chickens. My back gets sore if I have to bend over to hide the eggs.
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A very funny contest entry. Where can I get one of these chickens. My back gets sore if I have to bend over to hide the eggs.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
