Heart, soul and Love
Kind of political and spiritual34 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I nearly had a massive coronary when I opened your post, Moon Baby!
Now I realize this is going to sound funny to you (it does to everyone else), and especially coming from a guy who writes the kind of things that I often do.
But I suffer from a phobia known as Ovinaphobia, or a morbid fear of sheep.
Are you laughing yet?
I can see your lips moving...
As for the context of your poem (which I had to scroll down to read without looking any further at that horrid photo!), I couldn't agree with you more.
Haven't we learned from our mistakes by now?
If we want to keep living we have to change somehow! ... The answer is, "NO," based on our last presidential election results, probably not...
Good political commentary poem.
Enjoy your weekend.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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I nearly had a massive coronary when I opened your post, Moon Baby!
Now I realize this is going to sound funny to you (it does to everyone else), and especially coming from a guy who writes the kind of things that I often do.
But I suffer from a phobia known as Ovinaphobia, or a morbid fear of sheep.
Are you laughing yet?
I can see your lips moving...
As for the context of your poem (which I had to scroll down to read without looking any further at that horrid photo!), I couldn't agree with you more.
Haven't we learned from our mistakes by now?
If we want to keep living we have to change somehow! ... The answer is, "NO," based on our last presidential election results, probably not...
Good political commentary poem.
Enjoy your weekend.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Hi Dean, Thank you first of all for the great review despite the phobia of the lambs! Sorry about that, I should have found something more appropriate. I'm glad you found some good in what I feel even though I am only one, if there are enough of us we can make things happen in a positive way. I guess having all the money in the world can't buy a person everything. But having love in your heart can be felt by many and it doesn't cost a thing! Hey, that's really cool how your name gets written out! There must be an app for that...i
Comment from Cindy Warren
I can't imagine what some leaders are thinking. One wants to build walls, others think it's a good idea for people to blow themselves up and take innocent people with them. It all sounds crazy to me. If this world is going to survive, people need to get together. There has to be a peaceful solution.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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I can't imagine what some leaders are thinking. One wants to build walls, others think it's a good idea for people to blow themselves up and take innocent people with them. It all sounds crazy to me. If this world is going to survive, people need to get together. There has to be a peaceful solution.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review and your sentiment. We do live in a crazy world and I truly believe if more people felt the way I do we could have a better world. How good is it when you feel happy and at peace with yourself and everyone else? I could be penniless and be rich all at the same time. Thank you so much for the support!
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is a very good philosophy poem. You made your case strong as each stanza tell it's own part of the story and as it goes on you seem to cover all the important aspects of why there are so many differences that could be changed to lead to a world of harmony with just a little thoughtfulness and cooperation. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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This is a very good philosophy poem. You made your case strong as each stanza tell it's own part of the story and as it goes on you seem to cover all the important aspects of why there are so many differences that could be changed to lead to a world of harmony with just a little thoughtfulness and cooperation. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind words! Now is the time we all really do need to come together. We all depend on each other to make our world right, even when we are being led down a path that's all wrong for us. We the people must stick together to do what's right for all concerned. I truly believe there is strength in numbers and with enough people who feel the same way something good can come from it. Thanks for the support!
Comment from robyn corum
Moon Baby,
I do think this is an important message and I wish more people would take heed to it. The world we're living in is a bit scary these days. Thanks so much for the pep talk!
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Moon Baby,
I do think this is an important message and I wish more people would take heed to it. The world we're living in is a bit scary these days. Thanks so much for the pep talk!
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the great review and agreeing with the sentiment. We the people can be a pretty strong force when we all stand together! Thank you for seeing my vision too.
