Amber Alert
1-7-1 contest62 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
They just keep adding new short forms, don't they. Yours has the perfect required syllable count of 1-7-1. Good luck to you Linda:)
teresa
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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They just keep adding new short forms, don't they. Yours has the perfect required syllable count of 1-7-1. Good luck to you Linda:)
teresa
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Teresa, it's hard to tell a story as they get smaller...thank you so much....and thank you for the good luck sweet lady...smiling back at ya...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-7-1 poem. We warn our children as we were warned about strangers. But sometimes the ones close and whom you know also holding danger.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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A very well-written 1-7-1 poem. We warn our children as we were warned about strangers. But sometimes the ones close and whom you know also holding danger.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Sandra, that is soooooo true...I always told my kids...anyone...I don't care who they are messes with you...tell me...they are not going to hurt me...I'm going to hurt them...thank you so very much for a great review...
Comment from nomi338
Absolutely run. Run because your very life may be at stake. If you can attract the attention of another adult. Child predators must be stopped at any and all costs. They are absolutely the worst.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Absolutely run. Run because your very life may be at stake. If you can attract the attention of another adult. Child predators must be stopped at any and all costs. They are absolutely the worst.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Nolan, thank you so much for a great review...and you are so very right...scream...run...do all you can to get help...it's not just the children Nolan....it's everyone...thank you
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi the warning here is so serious , I could not have missed or carelessly avoid it. But has it come tothis?all strangers have become someone to be shunned. It is sad. But still this writing should carry on it warning.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Hi the warning here is so serious , I could not have missed or carelessly avoid it. But has it come tothis?all strangers have become someone to be shunned. It is sad. But still this writing should carry on it warning.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Danny, it is awful we have to scare our kids today to protect them...but better to be safe then sorry....and it is not just the children...it is everyone...even to go to church today is unsafe...that's pretty sad...thank you so very much for a great review...
Comment from heyjude
A very good 1 7 1 on a topic that's relevant for our society today.
Any mother will tell her children about strangers and warn them
to be careful if someone approaches them. The use of the run
twice emphasizes it even more.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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A very good 1 7 1 on a topic that's relevant for our society today.
Any mother will tell her children about strangers and warn them
to be careful if someone approaches them. The use of the run
twice emphasizes it even more.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Judy, thank you so much for a wonderful review...kids have to be so careful today...everyone has to be so careful...thank you
Comment from fimarie78
This is really effective and contains an important message. The visual is well chosen. If only our world was safer and we didn't need to share this message with our young people. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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This is really effective and contains an important message. The visual is well chosen. If only our world was safer and we didn't need to share this message with our young people. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Fimarie, it truly is sad...parents have to scare their kids to protect them...but it's not just the kids...it is everyone...thank you for a great review...and for all your luck...
Comment from robyn corum
Mom is a very smart woman! This is a worthy entry in the 1/7/1 contest. I wish you much luck. I've read several of the entries so far and yours does edge pretty high. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Mom is a very smart woman! This is a worthy entry in the 1/7/1 contest. I wish you much luck. I've read several of the entries so far and yours does edge pretty high. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Robyn, thank you so very much for a great review...yes us mom's try to get it right...thank you for all your luck...
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is a serious subject handled very well and enhanced by the picture. A good message and excellent entry, well done and good luck Meia :)
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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This is a serious subject handled very well and enhanced by the picture. A good message and excellent entry, well done and good luck Meia :)
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Meia, thank you so very much for a great review...it truly is a serious subject...we live in scary times...thank you for the good luck...
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You made excellent use of the syllables allotted by delivering a powerful message of timely social relevance. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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You made excellent use of the syllables allotted by delivering a powerful message of timely social relevance. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Angel, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome
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My pleasure. You certainly earned my vote.
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Thank you so very much Amber...smiling....
Comment from Bill O'Bier
The amber alert It originated in the United States in 1996. AMBER is officially a backronym for America's Missing: Broadcast Emergency Response but was named after Amber Hagerman, a 9-year-old abducted and murdered in Arlington, Texas, in 1996. Thank for the great short poem.
Bill
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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The amber alert It originated in the United States in 1996. AMBER is officially a backronym for America's Missing: Broadcast Emergency Response but was named after Amber Hagerman, a 9-year-old abducted and murdered in Arlington, Texas, in 1996. Thank for the great short poem.
Bill
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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HI Bill, thank you so much for a great review...and explaining what AMBER stands for...I am so glad you like it...