Herman and Tootsie
Budding Romance33 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
SIZE DON'T MATTER IT IS WHAT THE PERSON IS LIKE BEHIND THE WRAPPER THAT COUNTS AND SOME TIMES IT HITS YOU LIKE A TON OF BRICKS WHEN YOU FALL FOR SOME ONE
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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SIZE DON'T MATTER IT IS WHAT THE PERSON IS LIKE BEHIND THE WRAPPER THAT COUNTS AND SOME TIMES IT HITS YOU LIKE A TON OF BRICKS WHEN YOU FALL FOR SOME ONE
Comment Written 24-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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You got that right, Sweetheart! Some of the most attractive people I've ever known weren't much to look at. Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
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HUGS
Comment from DonandVicki
your story caught my attention and i think this is a good down to earth trucker story. Good character development and humerous dialouge.
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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your story caught my attention and i think this is a good down to earth trucker story. Good character development and humerous dialouge.
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, DonandVicki, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from cterp
This is a humorous, slightly off putting story. I'm put off by the derogatory terms used to describe Tootsie:
butt ugly
bulging boxcar caboose
waddled and bumped
hauled-off and smacked the table
big ol' Hell-raisin'
There are ways to humorously draw large characters that aren't derogatory. A large woman can be elegant; why not play against type?
chris
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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This is a humorous, slightly off putting story. I'm put off by the derogatory terms used to describe Tootsie:
butt ugly
bulging boxcar caboose
waddled and bumped
hauled-off and smacked the table
big ol' Hell-raisin'
There are ways to humorously draw large characters that aren't derogatory. A large woman can be elegant; why not play against type?
chris
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2016
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I'm sorry you feel the way you do about my descriptions. I'm writing a story and building a character, of course she is a fictitious character. Until recently I weighted 440 pounds, so I definitely wasn't making fun or being discriminatory toward anyone. As you can see by the picture I included as the person, she is anything but ugly. This was one person's opinion, the lady who worked the desk, and we should all be able to express our own opinions in telling a story. Sorry you didn't like it. :-)