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Peace Through Prayer

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Comment from L.lora
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Well written and presented.
No one should down rate you
just because they may not
agree with you. You have some
very valid points. I'd love to
have a further discussion with
you...I see your awakening. Remember,
that whatever you do, let it come
from God's truth, not the truth of
man or religion or someone's philosophy.
You did great. Peace has to begin within
each individual--prayer unlocks that
door as long as it is sincere...genuine.
Again, well done. Lora

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Exactly. It is all about listening to God. I'm going to talk about it with my spiritual director tomorrow. thanks so much Lora.
reply by L.lora on 21-Jul-2016
    Anytime, let me know how your talk goes...Lora
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I could not skip. I love to read the opinion of others and I am glad I stopped to visit.
You made a valid point and if you think about it and everyone stops to pray, can you imagine the power of that moment when everything stops. Wouldn't that be fantastic?
Nicely written and I loved the 'it's not...but it is;
it is...but it is not'.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thanks Barb. I'm glad you like the 'is' and 'is nots' - I do too.
Comment from GracieAnn
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Theresa, hi there.

This is a grammatically well written piece that conveys your emotions and stances well. Jesus said, "In this world you will have trouble, but I bring you My peace". He is the only one who will bring peace to this old world in His time.
:0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thanks GracieAnn. good to see you.
Comment from lancellot
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I don't disagree. I think many people do not understand all the non-spiritual aspects of faith. They miss the part of a shared sense of morality, a common belief and hope that bound different people together. We have lost that, and that is a shame.

Well written.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thanks Lance:)
Comment from c_lucas
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Marching for peace is another way of improving one's life style. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thanks Charlie:)
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Teresa,

This is well written and very interesting to read. You've said a lot of wonderful things which are true. We should be praying a lot more which will bring us help from God to help others.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thanks so much my frien:)
reply by MizKat on 22-Jul-2016
    You're very welcome my friend.
Comment from LIJ Red
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People who do not believe do not pray to the void of space. First you must make them believe. To do this you must overcome the apparent random godlessness of the universe, in their minds, to make them feel that there is a method in this madness, in the very fabric of right versus wrong. I hope you can do it...and fast. Go get 'em.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thank you Red:)
Comment from humpwhistle
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I do not question your faith. But I'm not sure pose a credible argument to sway anyone who is not already a follower of your camp. You are talking to yourself. You don't entice others to abandon their beliefs. And that, in the end, is the job of a missionary. All sane people want peace. You talk about your beliefs. Fine. But if you want to change hearts and minds, I think you have to appeal to their grievances.

I do not dispute you. Only your technique.

Peace, Lee



about the horrific crimes and problems of in this country--Maybe there's an extra word in here.

Now more than ever, this country and every other country need to come together in prayer, to unite in peace. God, through His reign in the heavens and all of earth, who has given His kingdom and power to His son, Jesus Christ, also has given us His kingdom and power, through the death and resurrection of His son.--This is a classic example of preaching to the choir. If I don't already believe, this passage offers me no reason to believe.



 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Well, many also don't believe in the power of paying it forward, but it is a movement that continues to change lives. Thanks Lee for the review and for catching the extra word.
Comment from Challah1202
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This is a Five Star post. The words are good. The message is old and valued. We have the opportunity to call down Peace on the Earth. The opportunity to make it a priority in our lives at this time. There will be people who disagree. There always have been. But then there are those who will stand and cheer or kneel and be silent. Take your positions.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thank you so much:)
Comment from cgpeoples
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I found a few grammatical errors when I first started reading but wow did you warm up! This is a beautifully written piece that flowly smoothly and conveys such an important message! I just submitted a piece entitled: "As the World Turns" that also touched on the condition of our world today. Your approach to the subject via prayer was conveyed so well!
Keep writing and God Bless!
Cindy

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thanks for the great review. I'll check your post out too.