THE TRINING Book Three
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Sparks Kindled: Fire or Ash"JOURNEY INTO REDEMPTION
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Comment from snooker155
not as interesting as your last submission felt this fell a bit flat on the reader making him think well what the hell was that all about it bored me stupid sorry but because the previous chapter was good I gave it three stars for the fact that you at least tried but very poor for a writer of your rank from snooker155x
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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not as interesting as your last submission felt this fell a bit flat on the reader making him think well what the hell was that all about it bored me stupid sorry but because the previous chapter was good I gave it three stars for the fact that you at least tried but very poor for a writer of your rank from snooker155x
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Thanks for reading.