Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is obviously a quite different relational experience between Glnot Reuther, Pondria, and Axtilla to how it originally was, I can't recall Axtila reappearing in any of these episodes, it's funny how seers and things have entered into this present time, guiding, cajoling, reshaping, well done, Jay blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Blessing to you, Roy. Thanks for reading. Gotta watch out for them seers.

reply by royowen on 10-Nov-2015

One sure does

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

I'm not familiar with this one, but enjoyed reading it anyhow. Your mind is full of colourful characters, and you bring them to life before the reader's eyes. I will keep an eye out for future chapters to see what happens to Doctrex.
Annette

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Glad to have you aboard, Annette. I've already reserved your seat. No charge for carry-ons.

reply by Annette Gulliver on 10-Nov-2015

Fair enough ...

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I think I have finally shaken the subconscious linking of your character names to doctors, whom I fear and distrust, and armpits. Just kidding. You build the tension
well and smoothly toward the point where the big three meet eyeball to eyeball.
Excellent drama.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

I think you'll like the dinner scene. Did I just give things away?

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

YES~~~one pump~~~thank you very much. (*>*)


Hi, Jay

_ Hey---what's this----posting AFTER 11:00?? Hmmmmm??
_ Never works when you bring a woman into the equation.
_ Trouble is bound to follow--too much testosterone in the room. (*<*)
_ Good chapter. I'm waiting for Glnot to make a move--just don't know what that will be yet.
_ I hope you are pump-worthy tonight.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*<*)

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Thanks, Jax. So glad you're reading this. Even after 11. I was writing from 8 to 10 and forgot to post at 9 PM. But it wasn't eleven here when I posted. Hey! Get over it! lOL.

Comment from Cletus Hardiman

Excellent

You've obviously spent some time on this one! I know I would have anyway! LOL It is a good job! Keep up the good work! Cletus Hardiman

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 Comment Written 08-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Cletus. Good to have a new person reading this. May I reserve a seat for you for the rest of the journey?