Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Well if this does not qualify as a surprise then I do not know what does!

Although I guess the surprise is the revelation after this story finishing.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015

Thank you very much for your encouraging review.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, the face to face meeting with your real mom had to be an emotional event for both of you. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015

Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked it.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Well written story. Quite a reunion was going to take place after such a long time. And so many questions needing answers. Should be a good contest entry.

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015

Thank you so much for your encouraging review.