This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Did Our Mum Swallow a Baby?"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Jacob Collins
An excellent piece of writing on childhood innocence, Sandra. I laughed at the part when the children thought that their Mum had swallowed the baby. A great piece of writing, I couldn't spot any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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An excellent piece of writing on childhood innocence, Sandra. I laughed at the part when the children thought that their Mum had swallowed the baby. A great piece of writing, I couldn't spot any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much, Jacob. It makes me giggle the things my brother and I thought. 60 years ago! Nightmare!! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my childhood memories. Thanks for the good luck wishes, too! xsx Sandra.
