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Wine, Women and Longing

A Sonnet

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Comment from Alan K Pease
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I see the warrior poet has already succumbed to a fair damsel. Looks like a way to become a couple even if only for the moment.

 Comment Written 01-May-2014


reply by the author on 02-May-2014
    Thank you very much, Alan. A moment is about all I'm good for when it comes to that, but at least a sonnet came out of it.
Comment from acerisestory
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Wow! I really liked your poem, and the message is loud and clear. Your language is very descriptive. I like "I bleed my heart in ink to hint" and "Then pour yourself -- I'll raise you to my lips. Hmmm. Quite erotic. Very nice work. acerisestory

 Comment Written 01-May-2014


reply by the author on 02-May-2014
    Thank you very much!
Comment from closetpoetjester
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Well if she's NOT wet, moist wine on your lips after this one, I'm sure there'll be some hens lining up for a bit of your sipping action.
A perfect sonnet imbibed with all the good oil...or is it plonk? LOL Mmmmmmm...fancy a night cap? LMAO
P

 Comment Written 01-May-2014


reply by the author on 02-May-2014
    Thank you, my dear. A night cap would be divine, especially if you're involved. Missed you to pieces, my saucy Aussie.
reply by closetpoetjester on 02-May-2014
    Hmmmm...wonder if you can turn me from sauce into wine.

    I'd LIKE to see you try.
    Grrrrrrrrrrrr
    x
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
    Well, I've had ladies calling out Jesus' name before, so it's quite possible...
reply by closetpoetjester on 02-May-2014
    Start sipping, big boy. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Wow, How very poetic David. Comparing your love to fine wine.
A very exotic sonnet and one that does you proud.

But when consumed with care, it's rich and deep,
Exotically erotic --purely pure--
A taste well-placed, and one to always keep
Within my reach, so that it may endure.

Well done! I'm sure she id pleased with your efforts. xx
Nancy

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 Comment Written 01-May-2014


reply by the author on 02-May-2014
    Thank you so much, my friend!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
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This is wonderfully romantic, David. I braced myself for the naughty, but instead found the sweet side of the Rogue. Very skillfully penned, as always. Well done.

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 Comment Written 01-May-2014


reply by the author on 02-May-2014
    Thank you so much, GLG! Just keeping you on your toes, my friend.