Shepherd
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Lord Is"poems inspired by Psalm 23
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Comment from krys123
W.j.debi, Through your poem is very inspirational, beneficial and regenerative and it shows much of your creativity, resourcefulness and your illuminative aspiration or passion.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting of your work and may you always find love wherever you are.
Alex
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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W.j.debi, Through your poem is very inspirational, beneficial and regenerative and it shows much of your creativity, resourcefulness and your illuminative aspiration or passion.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting of your work and may you always find love wherever you are.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Hi Alex,
Thank you for the analysis and kind comments. I appreciate you good wishes. Thank you.
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W.j.debi, you are so entirely welcome.
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the Rondeau poem as this piece has the correct number of lines totaling 15. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with revelation/require...can/compare...seeks/share...His/Holy...still/small. For this to be your first Rondeau, I love it. Good work.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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This piece meets the criteria of the Rondeau poem as this piece has the correct number of lines totaling 15. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with revelation/require...can/compare...seeks/share...His/Holy...still/small. For this to be your first Rondeau, I love it. Good work.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Hi Righteous Riter,
You made my day by saying that you love my first Rondeau and that I got the form correct. It means so much from someone who writes as well as you do. I appreciate the analysis and the encouragement. Thank you!
Comment from buzclick
I think you did a good job on this.
It flows well and is easy to read.
The message is one well remembered.
I liked this:
Our loving Father seeks to share
His Holy Spirit's tender care.
Thanks for posting.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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I think you did a good job on this.
It flows well and is easy to read.
The message is one well remembered.
I liked this:
Our loving Father seeks to share
His Holy Spirit's tender care.
Thanks for posting.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Hi Buzclick,
Thank you for the kind and positive review. I am so happy you enjoyed the message.
Comment from Janie King
I never try to review on poetic style as i am not a poet and my ignorance would soon show. But, this is very well-written and has much truth hidden within it. Great piece. God loves you and so do I.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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I never try to review on poetic style as i am not a poet and my ignorance would soon show. But, this is very well-written and has much truth hidden within it. Great piece. God loves you and so do I.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Hi Janie,
Thank you for the kind comment about the writing and the message. I appreciate the encouragement.