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Comment from Erik McGinley
The meter is forced imo, but maybe its on purpose?
Was this poem written for your girlfriend by any chance? Wanting to get a message across?
Do you mind if I borrow it to that end?
Nice read, ty :)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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The meter is forced imo, but maybe its on purpose?
Was this poem written for your girlfriend by any chance? Wanting to get a message across?
Do you mind if I borrow it to that end?
Nice read, ty :)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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Thank you Erik. No, just written generally. Feel free.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, very creative pantoum poem about the creative process and the instruments needed to make it happen. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, very creative pantoum poem about the creative process and the instruments needed to make it happen. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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Thank you sweetwoodjax. I appreciTe the comments and best wishes.
Comment from lakeport
Pens and pencils. indeed I should have a pen and paper always at hand when I thought for a poem enters my mind, before I forget it,
That's a very nice expressed poem, nice rhyming, God luck at the contest.God bless you, Lakeport.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Pens and pencils. indeed I should have a pen and paper always at hand when I thought for a poem enters my mind, before I forget it,
That's a very nice expressed poem, nice rhyming, God luck at the contest.God bless you, Lakeport.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Thank you Lakeport. I appreciate the best wishes.
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your welcome.Lakeport.
Comment from Petriesan
I don't know the name for this type of poem, but I do like the interlocking of the verses.
This made me think of the old pocket-protector days of nerd-vana.
Nice work
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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I don't know the name for this type of poem, but I do like the interlocking of the verses.
This made me think of the old pocket-protector days of nerd-vana.
Nice work
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Thank you Petriesan. This is a Pantoum. It is listed under Poetry Dances under the home tab of this site, if you'd like to learn more about it.
Comment from Nomar Chagrin
This was delightful and well-written. Unique to write about the actual tools for writing. Impeccable rhyming as well. There was some repetition, but I sensed that was intentional. Anyway, nice poem that brought a smile to my face.
~ Marv
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This was delightful and well-written. Unique to write about the actual tools for writing. Impeccable rhyming as well. There was some repetition, but I sensed that was intentional. Anyway, nice poem that brought a smile to my face.
~ Marv
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2013
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Thank you Starvin Marvin