ABC Super Hero
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Definitely a poem destined to be well accepted by young would-be super heroes.
Cleverly written and right on track for the attributes and actions of a super hero.
Nicely written and rhymed and a great presentation.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Definitely a poem destined to be well accepted by young would-be super heroes.
Cleverly written and right on track for the attributes and actions of a super hero.
Nicely written and rhymed and a great presentation.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your kind comments and generous review. I appreciate you taking time to comment on the presentation as well as the writing.
Comment from EMB
Based on this poem, I'd say that I'm reading the work of someone who's into reading Marvel Comics instead of DC comics, which is find because I started on Marvel. However, DC has much better writers now. :)
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Based on this poem, I'd say that I'm reading the work of someone who's into reading Marvel Comics instead of DC comics, which is find because I started on Marvel. However, DC has much better writers now. :)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Since I was writing the poem for my nephew, I was trying to put his favorite superheroes into the piece. He is way into the three that are named.
Thanks for the tip about DC Comics. I'll have to check them out. Thank you also for the generous review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Cookie333
You certainly have met the prompt, and what child does not root for the good guy to save the day? This was an excellent piece for the child and I wish you well in the contest (if it hasn't ended?)
thank you
k
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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You certainly have met the prompt, and what child does not root for the good guy to save the day? This was an excellent piece for the child and I wish you well in the contest (if it hasn't ended?)
thank you
k
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging comments and best wishes. I appreciate the generous stars as well.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
You have done so well here - from A to Z you've written a very good poem for the Children's Rhyming Poem Contest. Kids will love it - especially the boys will identify with Super Hero. I'm not sure that they will know who G>I> Joe is. But the poem is very good and they'll certainly know all about the last line. Well Done. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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You have done so well here - from A to Z you've written a very good poem for the Children's Rhyming Poem Contest. Kids will love it - especially the boys will identify with Super Hero. I'm not sure that they will know who G>I> Joe is. But the poem is very good and they'll certainly know all about the last line. Well Done. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind comments. You may be right about G.I. Joe, but my nephew really likes the action figures so I include him. I appreciate your encouraging comments and generous starts.
Comment from Tina McKala
Funny ABC poem with very good flow, that means very well structured and it didn't sound to be forced. I truly enjoyed this piece
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Funny ABC poem with very good flow, that means very well structured and it didn't sound to be forced. I truly enjoyed this piece
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you. I appreciate the kind comments and that you took time to consider the structure. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Comment from elchupakabra
Bam! That's awesome, I'm a huge super hero zeek( a little upset you failed to mention Batman but I'll let it slide lol) and the kid in me loved this piece. I really enjoy that you maintained a rhyme scheme through the entire alphabet, that was the icing on the cake. Best of luck in the contest, this should win in my opinion. Headed to voting booth super fast as of now.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Bam! That's awesome, I'm a huge super hero zeek( a little upset you failed to mention Batman but I'll let it slide lol) and the kid in me loved this piece. I really enjoy that you maintained a rhyme scheme through the entire alphabet, that was the icing on the cake. Best of luck in the contest, this should win in my opinion. Headed to voting booth super fast as of now.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Love your review. It was fun to read. Thank you so much. Sorry about Batman. He's one of my favorites too, but I couldn't work him in there even though I tried. The contest is over and a very worthy poem won, but thanks for the vote of confidence. I appreciate it.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Impressive write. Great expression throughout the piece, and I loved the Super Hero theme you brought into play. That will definitely catch the attention of the kids. Well done, Ridley
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Impressive write. Great expression throughout the piece, and I loved the Super Hero theme you brought into play. That will definitely catch the attention of the kids. Well done, Ridley
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging comments. I appreciate the generous stars, too.
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this ...it would make a good alphabet book with an action hero modern twist.....well done
There is a typo........Rescurers......rescuers....
Well done I enjoyed it
God bless
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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I love this ...it would make a good alphabet book with an action hero modern twist.....well done
There is a typo........Rescurers......rescuers....
Well done I enjoyed it
God bless
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for a generous review and encouragement. Thanks for catching the typo so I could fix it. I appreciate it.
Comment from chromeangel33
I really enjoyed your poem! Your poem shows you have a creative mind. Which always makes for good poetry. Only one minor mistake that I can see and that is you have spelled rescuers= rescurers
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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I really enjoyed your poem! Your poem shows you have a creative mind. Which always makes for good poetry. Only one minor mistake that I can see and that is you have spelled rescuers= rescurers
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you for pointing out the typo so I could correct it. I appreciate you taking the time to read my little poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from eafournier
This poem is great. It's so difficult to start each line with a different letter of the alphabet, without losing the flow, but you have done it very well. Kids will love this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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This poem is great. It's so difficult to start each line with a different letter of the alphabet, without losing the flow, but you have done it very well. Kids will love this poem.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for the generous review and encouragement. I appreciate it.