Chasing the Elusive Dream
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "A Rude Awakening"A southern couple's journey in the 60's,70's & 80'
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Comment from Zue65
I really like the honesty in your story, the frustrations in looking for a job and dealing with your boss is next to insanity I would say. Yes, looking for a good job is damned difficult but when luck knocks it really pours. God bless.
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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I really like the honesty in your story, the frustrations in looking for a job and dealing with your boss is next to insanity I would say. Yes, looking for a good job is damned difficult but when luck knocks it really pours. God bless.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I really appreciate you remarks.
Beth
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of pulling the reader into this chapter. This chapter hits on the realities of life which makes it easy for the reader to relate to. The transition is good. The balance is good. The pace is consistent as this piece makes me think of the saying, if it's not one thing, it's another. Good job.
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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The writer does a good job of pulling the reader into this chapter. This chapter hits on the realities of life which makes it easy for the reader to relate to. The transition is good. The balance is good. The pace is consistent as this piece makes me think of the saying, if it's not one thing, it's another. Good job.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this. I appreciate you encouraging comments.
Beth
