Chasing the Elusive Dream
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Safe Keeping"A southern couple's journey in the 60's,70's & 80'
33 total reviews
Comment from 4tulips
I did enjoy reading your story. However, there was so much story to the actual time of when your attitude changed towards other races. This is what I thought was the writing prompt for your story. Little time was given to this topic. The last three small paragraphs reflected on the prompt, as the earlier part of the story was the telling of the opening of the safe. Therefore I am not sure how to review this entry.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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I did enjoy reading your story. However, there was so much story to the actual time of when your attitude changed towards other races. This is what I thought was the writing prompt for your story. Little time was given to this topic. The last three small paragraphs reflected on the prompt, as the earlier part of the story was the telling of the opening of the safe. Therefore I am not sure how to review this entry.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I see where you are coming from. If it had been fiction,I could probably have made it work better but I tried to tell it exactly as it happened.
Comment from CR Delport
An interesting story that is well written. It reads nicely and flows smoothly. How many things have happened in our lives that one cant explain? Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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An interesting story that is well written. It reads nicely and flows smoothly. How many things have happened in our lives that one cant explain? Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Righteous Riter
This is an interesting story. So interesting that it had my attention from the start. The writer uses the mention of super nature to hook my mind. I am some what amazed by things hard to explain. The writer does a good job of releasing little detail and strange events to heighten my curiosity. The transitioning between events is smooth and the writer des a good job of leading the reader to a descent ending. Good work.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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This is an interesting story. So interesting that it had my attention from the start. The writer uses the mention of super nature to hook my mind. I am some what amazed by things hard to explain. The writer does a good job of releasing little detail and strange events to heighten my curiosity. The transitioning between events is smooth and the writer des a good job of leading the reader to a descent ending. Good work.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. It is true that many things in life can't be explained by logic. I really liked your comments.
