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Comment from wanderlost
This is a cool poem, T. The story is good and your arrangement is fascinating. I love the use of nonets in the middle. Great work and happy holidays!
Wanderlost
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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This is a cool poem, T. The story is good and your arrangement is fascinating. I love the use of nonets in the middle. Great work and happy holidays!
Wanderlost
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thanks for the review and Xmas wishes. May your days be merry and bright.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
I really enjoyed your poem especially with the first explanatory section to enlighten the reader. Some may question the (nonet) as there are a few questionable, or debatable sound counts. Otherwise, I like the question and answer dialogue within the poem. Nice flow, easy read from one stanza to the next. A vey interesting piece. Robin Gilmor
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I really enjoyed your poem especially with the first explanatory section to enlighten the reader. Some may question the (nonet) as there are a few questionable, or debatable sound counts. Otherwise, I like the question and answer dialogue within the poem. Nice flow, easy read from one stanza to the next. A vey interesting piece. Robin Gilmor
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Your excellent review is well appreciated.
Comment from guinea
Excellent work my friend. I so agree with your words. Words that you so clearly write about our creator. He is in charge of his creation. Great work. Shows deep thinking.
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Excellent work my friend. I so agree with your words. Words that you so clearly write about our creator. He is in charge of his creation. Great work. Shows deep thinking.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your inspiring review and the very generous 6 stars.
Comment from mystery poet
I really like this commentary!
The layout is a work of art within itself!
Your nonet writing style hold much truth
about God's meaning for this world and, I
agree that He designed us to be designer's
our selves, to create in our world, to
make better. Very interesting and compelling
piece. Thanks!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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I really like this commentary!
The layout is a work of art within itself!
Your nonet writing style hold much truth
about God's meaning for this world and, I
agree that He designed us to be designer's
our selves, to create in our world, to
make better. Very interesting and compelling
piece. Thanks!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Your words of encouragement keep the spark alive. Thank you.
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And thank you, too!
My pleasure!
Comment from EMB
You really leave no stone unturned with this epic poem about Him. I'd say you were definitely on a mission with your pen this time. What I liked most about this is that it comes from you, no quoting of scripture. Yes, you've put some real thought into this.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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You really leave no stone unturned with this epic poem about Him. I'd say you were definitely on a mission with your pen this time. What I liked most about this is that it comes from you, no quoting of scripture. Yes, you've put some real thought into this.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Edward for the wonderful review.
Comment from c_lucas
Man loses faith in God, when he loses faith in himself. You're right God created man out of Divine Love, making man a creature of love, not hate. Well written.
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Man loses faith in God, when he loses faith in himself. You're right God created man out of Divine Love, making man a creature of love, not hate. Well written.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you
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You're welccome.
Comment from Amanda Laiq
This piece is awe-inspiring! The structure you used made for a very pleasant read. I normally lose interest in poems of this length, but you kept my attention to the very end. Great work!
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This piece is awe-inspiring! The structure you used made for a very pleasant read. I normally lose interest in poems of this length, but you kept my attention to the very end. Great work!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you Amanda, glad you liked it.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a very wonderful piece of spiritual and inspirational poetry. It is a long post, but not hard to read because your diction is friendly and the matter you addressed very juicy. very well done
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This is a very wonderful piece of spiritual and inspirational poetry. It is a long post, but not hard to read because your diction is friendly and the matter you addressed very juicy. very well done
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
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Thank much Perp
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant tribute to our lord, the saviour. i love the nonet structure and the emphasis on god.
thank you for sharing!
happy holidays!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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this is a brilliant tribute to our lord, the saviour. i love the nonet structure and the emphasis on god.
thank you for sharing!
happy holidays!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you rjuselius.
Comment from Jina Sarma
thank you for giving a lesson to us. your words are like message from god. your poem is an inspiration to all. you have a deep spiritual thought. your style language sentences all look perfect.
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thank you for giving a lesson to us. your words are like message from god. your poem is an inspiration to all. you have a deep spiritual thought. your style language sentences all look perfect.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Jina