All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Dancing With Your Shadow"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is a dreamy innocent sort of poem with a beautiful, most appropriate, picture to illustrate it. It speaks of a sweet simple happiness, typical of childhood and the beach makes a perfect playground. congratulations. Giddy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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This is a dreamy innocent sort of poem with a beautiful, most appropriate, picture to illustrate it. It speaks of a sweet simple happiness, typical of childhood and the beach makes a perfect playground. congratulations. Giddy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thx so much, Giddy - haven't heard from you for a while?
Best wishes
Sharyn
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Backwards and forwards to the hospital. My mum (99) passed away 20th of November. Giddy
Comment from johnabrennan1
Great job !!!
This captures the simple things that bring us true simple happiness. Its all about staying close to our original nature.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Great job !!!
This captures the simple things that bring us true simple happiness. Its all about staying close to our original nature.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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It is, indeed, John. Thank you so much!
:0 Sharyn
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I gotta get in the shower myself now
Comment from Selina Stambi
You have such a poetic gift, visionary 1234!
"The smiling trade winds stirred your curls" ..... oh!
Just beautiful. I find that I'm beginning to watch for your work!
xxx
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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You have such a poetic gift, visionary 1234!
"The smiling trade winds stirred your curls" ..... oh!
Just beautiful. I find that I'm beginning to watch for your work!
xxx
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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What a lovely compliment! (coming from someone with such a fabulous name, too!) So glad you came to the beach with us for this one! :) Sharyn
Comment from Deorre Leonard
What a beautiful poem about playing and having fun on the beach as a child. the flow is good. Picture is perfect. I like this a lot. thanks for sharing. Deorre:)
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What a beautiful poem about playing and having fun on the beach as a child. the flow is good. Picture is perfect. I like this a lot. thanks for sharing. Deorre:)
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Bless you, Deorre! I'm so glad you came to the beach with us, and brought your magic '6' with you, my dear! Thank you so much! :) Sharyn
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Great read...
Comment from mermaids
Your words remind me of going to the beach as a child and feeling free and having fun. I like the free verse structure of this poem, it adds to the feeling of being near the ocean. Congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Your words remind me of going to the beach as a child and feeling free and having fun. I like the free verse structure of this poem, it adds to the feeling of being near the ocean. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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thx so much, mermaids! obviously in your element, hmm? :) Sharyn
Comment from MelissaBickel
I can see why this is the winner. Such lucious lines. Sweet smells and sounds and textures. What a true treat it was to read this gem.
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I can see why this is the winner. Such lucious lines. Sweet smells and sounds and textures. What a true treat it was to read this gem.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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thx so much Melissa - beaches do that to you, don't they? :) Sharyn
Comment from Ecclectic_Reverie
I absolutely love this poem. it is indeed a happy poem. You play so close attention to detail; that is definitely a talent, if not a gift. This piece was really enjoyable. Great read!
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I absolutely love this poem. it is indeed a happy poem. You play so close attention to detail; that is definitely a talent, if not a gift. This piece was really enjoyable. Great read!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much my dear! this was great fun to write! :) Sharyn
Comment from poetrypeg
Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem. It is sweet and the picture is adorable. I like the form you presented within your poem. The free flow of words.
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Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem. It is sweet and the picture is adorable. I like the form you presented within your poem. The free flow of words.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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thx so much for coming to the beach with us peg!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, this delightful, exuberant poem definitely is a winner!
It takes the reader back to the innocence and simplicity of childhood and the enjoyment of a lovely day.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Yes, this delightful, exuberant poem definitely is a winner!
It takes the reader back to the innocence and simplicity of childhood and the enjoyment of a lovely day.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Bless you for dancing on the beach with me, Janice! And a special thank you for your lovely, and so very much appreciated, SIX!
best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Sharyn,
This is a beauty and I can see how it won. Congrats my friend a job well done I enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Hi Sharyn,
This is a beauty and I can see how it won. Congrats my friend a job well done I enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much, Maureen! :) Sharyn