Just Daisy, Part 1
Inspired by 'through a child's eyes' prompt34 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
What an adorable, charming read this was - your little guy is very clever it seems. Your narrative voice was as sweet as I imagine this child to be, and the whole tale was an absolute delight, but especially when he says it's his day off! LOL
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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What an adorable, charming read this was - your little guy is very clever it seems. Your narrative voice was as sweet as I imagine this child to be, and the whole tale was an absolute delight, but especially when he says it's his day off! LOL
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Ideasaregems-Dawn, thank you very much for stopping by once again to read and review my work. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this work.. jlsavell
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jlsavell
Your short story reminds me so much If how my children tried the same trick (I don't feel good)
Love the reactions of the four year old and the phrase
( Just daisy)
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Hello jlsavell
Your short story reminds me so much If how my children tried the same trick (I don't feel good)
Love the reactions of the four year old and the phrase
( Just daisy)
Gert
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Once again Gert, thank you ever ever so much!!!!! I am so apreciative of you and your support.. jimi
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You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from Lobengula
Oh, this was brilliant!. I loved it. "Where does my tummy hurt? What kind of question's that?" That's lovely. Typical little boy. Your talent knows no bounds, Jimi. From the scholarly to the hilarious to the heartwrenching -- there's no subject or genres you can't tackle. With a mother like you, your son's going to grow up to be a genius.
They've only let me give you 5 stars. That's an outrage.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Oh, this was brilliant!. I loved it. "Where does my tummy hurt? What kind of question's that?" That's lovely. Typical little boy. Your talent knows no bounds, Jimi. From the scholarly to the hilarious to the heartwrenching -- there's no subject or genres you can't tackle. With a mother like you, your son's going to grow up to be a genius.
They've only let me give you 5 stars. That's an outrage.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Mike, I do not need stars. Just a review from you is enough to brighten my day... thank you so much wonderful friend, thank you.... jimi
Comment from TammyGail
Not only are you an amazing poetess your short scribe is brilliant as well - really I can see my four year thinking and saying the same thing - they simply don't understand mines when I take him back to his fathers and down come the tears on both sides of the fence - thank you so very much for sharing - your take on what your son was thinking is what all mothers think their children are thinking or at least I do -
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Not only are you an amazing poetess your short scribe is brilliant as well - really I can see my four year thinking and saying the same thing - they simply don't understand mines when I take him back to his fathers and down come the tears on both sides of the fence - thank you so very much for sharing - your take on what your son was thinking is what all mothers think their children are thinking or at least I do -
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2012
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Tammy Gail, what a sweet thing to say. Yes, children are so funny, not always sweet but really funny.. thank you once again sweet friend... jimi