Miss Higgledy Piggledy
36 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
This is excellent. I love that it tells a story and teachesa lesson in cleanliness at the same time. Veryy original to have the BOY as the neat person. Loved it!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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This is excellent. I love that it tells a story and teachesa lesson in cleanliness at the same time. Veryy original to have the BOY as the neat person. Loved it!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, RYME4U!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is really really well written! Perfect for kids... they'd love it. The message is a good one... a clean room is its own reward!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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This is really really well written! Perfect for kids... they'd love it. The message is a good one... a clean room is its own reward!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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Thank you so very much Phyllis!
Comment from DGallacher
First of all, a very nice poem. With lesson at the end to boot. Your rhyming was good, and imagery was well thought out. I have never seen a boy cleaner then a girl though. Is that possible? :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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First of all, a very nice poem. With lesson at the end to boot. Your rhyming was good, and imagery was well thought out. I have never seen a boy cleaner then a girl though. Is that possible? :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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Fraid so, my brother was! We have now swopped places, his wife cleans up for him, and I clean up for mine!! Thank you for the lovely review!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good entry for the contest. It is flowing and well rhymed. Isn't there a rhyme called Higgledy Piggledy, my fat hen.
It shows how smart some kids can be. It also shows how pride can cause you to keep doing something even with no other prompting.
The picture of the full toy box makes you think of a kid who just finished cleaning his/her room.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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This is a good entry for the contest. It is flowing and well rhymed. Isn't there a rhyme called Higgledy Piggledy, my fat hen.
It shows how smart some kids can be. It also shows how pride can cause you to keep doing something even with no other prompting.
The picture of the full toy box makes you think of a kid who just finished cleaning his/her room.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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Do you know, I think there is! I hope I am not done for copyright!! Thank you for the great review!
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You're welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from percival86jack
She didn't find pennies, there wasn't one there,
but her room looked so pretty, she did not even care.
Outside her room, Smarty Pants smiled
he was such a clever and cunning young child!
SWEET! This should do well in the contest, my friend... loved it! Cheers!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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She didn't find pennies, there wasn't one there,
but her room looked so pretty, she did not even care.
Outside her room, Smarty Pants smiled
he was such a clever and cunning young child!
SWEET! This should do well in the contest, my friend... loved it! Cheers!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much, Jack!
Comment from Crackerberries
This was really good... so funny but I had a hard time with Miss Higgledy Piggledy I wanted to keep calling her Higgedly Piggedly... tongue twister of sorts... very good. Good luck to you in the contest...this was a real treat to read and I'm sure kids will love it.
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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This was really good... so funny but I had a hard time with Miss Higgledy Piggledy I wanted to keep calling her Higgedly Piggedly... tongue twister of sorts... very good. Good luck to you in the contest...this was a real treat to read and I'm sure kids will love it.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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Thank you Crackerberries, for you great review, glad you liked it!
