The Edge of Reality
How it feels to be near death89 total reviews
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Dark Lord ....
Only you can know what led you to share with us, this free-thought writing. There is surely a great deal hidden behind your words which your readers can hardly begin to imagine.
From a writing point of view, there is nothing to suggest changing.
Why not emerge into the light - you may be surprised at what you then may be inspired to write.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Hullo Dark Lord ....
Only you can know what led you to share with us, this free-thought writing. There is surely a great deal hidden behind your words which your readers can hardly begin to imagine.
From a writing point of view, there is nothing to suggest changing.
Why not emerge into the light - you may be surprised at what you then may be inspired to write.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review, I do appreciate it...dark lord
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This interesting and intriguing work was a pleasure to both read and review. Strong feelings are evoked. Very well written!
GREAT JOB!!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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This interesting and intriguing work was a pleasure to both read and review. Strong feelings are evoked. Very well written!
GREAT JOB!!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from aiyoung3
Very well written; thank you for your words and message. I appreciate when artists can expose the deeper, darker side of reality, of life. The side most people are afraid to acknowledge, let alone, embrace. I wrote a little poem for myself that I put on a painting that states: "The roads that we travel are wicked and strong, but open your mind and you'll find beauty's true song." We just need to acknowledge and embrace the darkness, let it have it's place...allow for the light and the dark :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Very well written; thank you for your words and message. I appreciate when artists can expose the deeper, darker side of reality, of life. The side most people are afraid to acknowledge, let alone, embrace. I wrote a little poem for myself that I put on a painting that states: "The roads that we travel are wicked and strong, but open your mind and you'll find beauty's true song." We just need to acknowledge and embrace the darkness, let it have it's place...allow for the light and the dark :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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WOW!!!! Thank you for this gift, it really means the world to me that you think this highly of my writing...dark lord
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Very poetic call on deaths awakening.
I like this very much, as a new leaning
on the subject. In this you succumb to
the ultimate. Eric
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Very poetic call on deaths awakening.
I like this very much, as a new leaning
on the subject. In this you succumb to
the ultimate. Eric
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
My goodness.. this is such
a dramatic piece, my friend..
dark and quite frightening.
I've been near death and it wasn't a
bit as bad as this... I felt I was
floating, but at peace... thank goodness.
A well written piece.
Margaret
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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My goodness.. this is such
a dramatic piece, my friend..
dark and quite frightening.
I've been near death and it wasn't a
bit as bad as this... I felt I was
floating, but at peace... thank goodness.
A well written piece.
Margaret
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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WOW! Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from cce29
not sure what to thin k of the photo. the poem is separated in identifying stanzas well, yet they all tie in to the main subject very well. You put a lot of feeling into this. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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not sure what to thin k of the photo. the poem is separated in identifying stanzas well, yet they all tie in to the main subject very well. You put a lot of feeling into this. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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I thank you for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from cthomsen
This is powerful. I wonder if you have been to this place -you write about it quite accurately. I wonder what you mean by, "It will end on my own terms." This poem is uncomfortable to read (I mean from an emotional standpoint). Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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This is powerful. I wonder if you have been to this place -you write about it quite accurately. I wonder what you mean by, "It will end on my own terms." This poem is uncomfortable to read (I mean from an emotional standpoint). Well done.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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I thank you for the fab review, I do appreciate you stopping by and reviewing and reading my work...dark lord
Comment from Liilia
Excellent walk through the meanderings of the human soul - reaching for the ultimate. Unfortunately, when one is on the knees or lying down, or just close to the ground, the head and brain get closer to the center of the earth and beware - serenity is also closer at hand. That, to me, is the danger of kneeling, etc. What if life became smooth and flowing like water - that would not do!! You choose words very well and have an amazing, courageous take on what it is to be a thinking, breathing human. Thanks for sharing this powerful piece.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Excellent walk through the meanderings of the human soul - reaching for the ultimate. Unfortunately, when one is on the knees or lying down, or just close to the ground, the head and brain get closer to the center of the earth and beware - serenity is also closer at hand. That, to me, is the danger of kneeling, etc. What if life became smooth and flowing like water - that would not do!! You choose words very well and have an amazing, courageous take on what it is to be a thinking, breathing human. Thanks for sharing this powerful piece.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from hellion5
Powerful stuff! Particularly the concept of living life on your own terms regardless of the cost. Vivid imagery.
I tip-toe on the verge of insanity.--love this!
Great work--
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Powerful stuff! Particularly the concept of living life on your own terms regardless of the cost. Vivid imagery.
I tip-toe on the verge of insanity.--love this!
Great work--
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from Penny 4 your thought
This is a scary thought from deaths door. This is a well written free-verse poem. The art work does an exemplary job of representing you work. Excellent job. All in all a solid five.
Penny 4 your thought
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This is a scary thought from deaths door. This is a well written free-verse poem. The art work does an exemplary job of representing you work. Excellent job. All in all a solid five.
Penny 4 your thought
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
