Thoughts on Religion.
An Acrostic about faith.34 total reviews
Comment from TammyGail
What a beautiful poem Robina
Your imagery is just stunning
And your Acrostic poem was very well written
It flowed well
and was well presented
Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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What a beautiful poem Robina
Your imagery is just stunning
And your Acrostic poem was very well written
It flowed well
and was well presented
Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review, Ine. Added a video now from one of my favourite gospel songs. Thanks for well wishes.
Comment from Misrael
Yes how true that faith can seeus through anything even the toughest times and GOD can even make our enemies our friends. Yes he is the only one who can take us to heaven. I had to read the poem over twice because it was put in a way that was sort of awkward. But the message is good. Good job and good read.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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Yes how true that faith can seeus through anything even the toughest times and GOD can even make our enemies our friends. Yes he is the only one who can take us to heaven. I had to read the poem over twice because it was put in a way that was sort of awkward. But the message is good. Good job and good read.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review, Ine. What did you think eas akward? Added a video now.
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
very nicely done, me Dutchess Ine,
but you've left an 'H' out in
THOUGHTS! i'll give five, as i
know you'll put it right!
thank you and muchly good luck!
warmly, xx, eph.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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very nicely done, me Dutchess Ine,
but you've left an 'H' out in
THOUGHTS! i'll give five, as i
know you'll put it right!
thank you and muchly good luck!
warmly, xx, eph.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review, Ine. Yes I will put it right-thanks. Added a video now.
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your acrostic poem--I love your poem and give some good advice to all-I especially like where you write(Love your fellow humans) this is somethig we have to do as Christians--well penned -great job.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your acrostic poem--I love your poem and give some good advice to all-I especially like where you write(Love your fellow humans) this is somethig we have to do as Christians--well penned -great job.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind and generous review Chita