Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Now you made me hungry, they sound really delicious.
Well written , I think you touch all the points needed to make a great add. Good luck.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010

Thanks Pili. Sounds yummy, eh? Such a sweet review.

Comment from rudywalsh

Excellent

This is crazy, I did another review about Aigner Chocolate and they tried to say that the company was 150 years ol and yet you say 30, I have never heard of the company anyway but it's chocolate, you can't go wrong.
A very sweet description of a much sorted treat by the sounds of things, great detail and praise for what i'm sure is a very popular pass time amongst near by new yorkers.
Good luck in the contest, a great contender.
Take care Gungalo and have a good evening...Rudy

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Thanks so much Rudy. Funny but there are more now than earlier. Love your sweeeeeeeet review. MUAHHHHHHHHHHH. You have a great evening too poet!!!!

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Gungalo:

you had my mouth watering as I read this
piece about Aigner Chocolate -- it is the
best one I've read so far because it
concentrated on the chocolate and how
it would make people happy rather than
trying to share every little thing about
the family who made them

thanks for sharing
good luck in the contest
love,
jan

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Sigh, thanks so much Jan. It was different for me but I did enjoy doing this one.

Comment from RKagan

Excellent

What a great advertisment for this awesome chocolate. I know this is a contest entry, but I have no idea when the voting booth opens. I looked but did not see it. Excellent piece!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Thanks you so much. This is the last day for the contest and I think it says in the contest info there won't be any booths that the company is going to choose. What a sweet review!!!!

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing about the aigner chocolate company and the different candy they make. i wish you the best of luck in the contest. i like the alliteration in your description line

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Thanks so much!!! It's a different write for me for sure but I had fun doing it, girl. Your words are sweet!!!!!

Comment from amada

Excellent

If i were to buy these chocolates, this phrase will the the deal breaker, as they call it " Our aim is to provide the best and tastiest chocolate adorned with the knowing of what is not just good ... but great." Send me 3 boxes!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Three on the way ... by air!! Love your review of this and thanks so much. MMMMMMMMMMMMMM Aigner!!! LOL.

Comment from Charlene0513

Good

To Gungalo,
A short skit of the impression one gets after they have tried and enjoyed the luxerious sweetness of an Aigner Chocolate.
Would be more impacted by your product if you had told the person from where and how long the business had been inoperation.Also, it would help if you had given a run-down of types of chocolate sold. eg: truffles, choc.mixed/nuts or cream-filled choc.
Charlene

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Think you missed the 30 years, eh? But this is my version of the advertisement. It's something I feel works. The rest is on the website for those who want a break down. They only want three to four short paragraphs. Thanks for your input and the read.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Gungalo,

What a beautiful box of chocolates and you've made our mouths drool for its contents. Very well done and I wish you well in the contest.

Carol

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Thank you so much and what a delicious review from you.

Comment from annettebda

Excellent

Look what I found when I finally got to my mailbox, I bow to a master.... erm mistress I mean. You have imbued this piece with all the intimacy and romance that we associate with great chocolate....very seductive indeed.

Annette

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Oh you make me soooo smile girl. Glad you like this one. Different for me.

Comment from MS Writer

Excellent

I really thought this conveyed the desire to buy the chocolates. Very descriptive and at the same time very friendly. Not staid or too promotional.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010

Thanks so very much. Bit of a different write for sure.