Quietude
Heroic Crown Of Sonnets - 15 interlinked sonnets.84 total reviews
Comment from Bellringer
This was an incredible labor of love. Your lines flowed seamlessly and your expressions touch the mind and soul. This special place of peace is made alive by your rich lines. I truly enjoyed reading this. Kudos!. Best wishes, Hector
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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This was an incredible labor of love. Your lines flowed seamlessly and your expressions touch the mind and soul. This special place of peace is made alive by your rich lines. I truly enjoyed reading this. Kudos!. Best wishes, Hector
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you so very much Hector for a great review of this one. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Ted T
Hi :)
well written with an expansive universal message. Nice structure and stanza design.
The tempo and tone is well done
The main problem I have with a piece like this is extensive length.
Shorter works better. Most long poems are hard to get published.
Ted
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Hi :)
well written with an expansive universal message. Nice structure and stanza design.
The tempo and tone is well done
The main problem I have with a piece like this is extensive length.
Shorter works better. Most long poems are hard to get published.
Ted
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thanks Ted. Perhaps, but to me ths was a personal accomplishment. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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Okay, it works for you and that's fine :)
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Quite a challenge you took on here my friend, and what an amazing result! Your words are so descriptive- each line outdoing the other. Fifteen perfect sonnets in not a job I would tackle- but you have made it look easy. This was WELL worth the 5 hours you've put into it- Would have taken some a week or more for this finished product. Amazing! Betty
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Quite a challenge you took on here my friend, and what an amazing result! Your words are so descriptive- each line outdoing the other. Fifteen perfect sonnets in not a job I would tackle- but you have made it look easy. This was WELL worth the 5 hours you've put into it- Would have taken some a week or more for this finished product. Amazing! Betty
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much Betty for your review of this one. Yeah, a long time but so glad I did it. LOL. At least now I can say I did. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Amfunny
My goodness. You did an amazing job. It was so friggin long!!! I did enjoy reading and reviewing this though. I love quiet. I can then hear the sounds of nature... and the peacefulness you can't get from tv noise, etc. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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My goodness. You did an amazing job. It was so friggin long!!! I did enjoy reading and reviewing this though. I love quiet. I can then hear the sounds of nature... and the peacefulness you can't get from tv noise, etc. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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LOL, Amfunny, yeah you are. Thanks you for reading it and enjoying it. Now you know me for my heart and soul are in that write. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from FredCollingwood
I can't imagine how long it took you to write this. It took me four hours to read it, but it's worth it. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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I can't imagine how long it took you to write this. It took me four hours to read it, but it's worth it. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Smiling at you!!! Thanks Fred for a great review of this one. Five hours and 12 minutes to be exact. I appreciate you reading and liking it. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from bhogg
What an undertaking! I'm not a poet at all, but I love words and how they are put together to create wonderful imagery - for that alone, I appreciate your posting. Regards, Bill
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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What an undertaking! I'm not a poet at all, but I love words and how they are put together to create wonderful imagery - for that alone, I appreciate your posting. Regards, Bill
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks so much Bill. I think it's all in what a reader gets from it no matter what the style. Each will walk away after reading with something different. Thanks so much!!!
Comment from Renee' J Thomas
I am in awe of the time involved in writing something of this scale...very impressive indeed. And then to have it come out so good is a very good thing indeed.
good job
renee
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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I am in awe of the time involved in writing something of this scale...very impressive indeed. And then to have it come out so good is a very good thing indeed.
good job
renee
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks Renee for a wonderful reciew of this. My heart and soul are in this write. It is me.
Comment from Addy García
on a canvas covered in white, created a great work, and how the artist's brush strokes with each fall, to build a beautiful poem that delights us in each sonnet, a song to life is each verse and take us to the corners where the soul contemplates the majesty of nature.
Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful work worthy of a mural ..
congratulations.
ADDY GARCIA
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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on a canvas covered in white, created a great work, and how the artist's brush strokes with each fall, to build a beautiful poem that delights us in each sonnet, a song to life is each verse and take us to the corners where the soul contemplates the majesty of nature.
Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful work worthy of a mural ..
congratulations.
ADDY GARCIA
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Sigh poet, your review is a work of art. Here I am over here smiling all over again. thank you so very much!!!!
Comment from Pili Pubul
Wow, you have my greatest admiration for this magnificent poem, it is easy to imagine the effort that took to create it. Precious images , real and precious, astounding style and a delight to read. I must confess that all my life I needed my moments of solitude and contemplation. CONGRATULATIONS.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Wow, you have my greatest admiration for this magnificent poem, it is easy to imagine the effort that took to create it. Precious images , real and precious, astounding style and a delight to read. I must confess that all my life I needed my moments of solitude and contemplation. CONGRATULATIONS.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks so much Pili!!! what a wonderful review from you. Yeah, it took a while to do but you will find my heart and soul in it. Again, thanks. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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Muaaaaaaaaa back,and congratulations again.
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Thank you. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Wow this one blows me away. I love how the story just travels across the page...each mixing and providing strength to the next continuing the move down the page. Great visual words and wonderful cadence. A fab poem. thanks for writing and sharing and showing us how well one of this style can be written. Nice job. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Wow this one blows me away. I love how the story just travels across the page...each mixing and providing strength to the next continuing the move down the page. Great visual words and wonderful cadence. A fab poem. thanks for writing and sharing and showing us how well one of this style can be written. Nice job. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks Kiwi!!! What a fabulous review from you. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.