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Back at the Cyber Cafe

Carmen's near-death experience

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Comment from RebelRose
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lightening stuck ... [struck]
remember to included ... [include]
stuck the cable [struck]

I probably shouldn't even point these nits out as they don't really count. I know the trouble you are having with the Spanish keyboard and spellcheck. You are having a time of it, kid. I hope the weather settles down soon and no more thunder storms for awhile.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Thanks for catching the spags. Carmen is exptected to fully recover and should be home sometime this afternoon which in Mexico means tomorrow or Friday.
Comment from Belinda
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So sorry for Carmen. I be she was a lively South American lady before she got the accident. Don't bother to edit your spags in the cyber cafe, the 'teachers' in FS will let you go this time. Thanks for sharing this 'romance', whatever happens.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Carmen is recovering quite quickly and should be home sometime this afternoon with a brand new heart. Of course, here in Mexico, this afternoon probably means tomorrow of Friday.
Comment from Soledadpaz
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I actually don't see any spags. Maybe you're becoming a pro with that Spanish keyboard. I like the idea of naming your computer. I am going to borrow it and name my new laptop. It's only 10 days old or so and we are becoming fast friends. It's a fast computer! Thanks for the money and the points.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    I name everything. When you don't have a lot of friends it's smart to stay on good terms with your refrigerator and stove.
reply by Soledadpaz on 08-Sep-2010
    You have friends here, Smurphgirl. Count me as one of them. Maybe one day I'll get to visit Mazatlan. My dream is seeing San Miguel de Allende, but what's bus ride?
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2010
    Bus rides in Mexico are pretty cheap and quite pleasant. From Mazatlan to San Meguel de Allende it is about two days and you have to change busses.
reply by Soledadpaz on 09-Sep-2010
    Two days?? Is that right? I guess I could look at a map. Maybe, I'll fly or maybe I'll make it into an adventure.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
    No matter which route you take, it will still be an adventure!
Comment from gene_ink
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Considering you situation, Smurfgirl, I have little comment
Gene
actually the same suggestion in two places
- first bolt of lightning stuck(struck).
- stuck(struck) the cable

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Thans for catching the spage. Hopefully Carmen will return home by tomorrow...at least that is what I was told.
Comment from june prescott
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You are so very generous to us readers and reviewers! Wow, my heart goes out to you while without your dear Carmen. I feel your pain and frustration. Not having a computer is my worst nightmare. Luckily my hubby is a computer guru and keeps things up to date and in fine working order. Thanks for allowing me to earn a few points more, and I'll send you a little cyber love. JP

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Believe me, I can use all I can get.
reply by june prescott on 08-Sep-2010
    Can't get enough, as they say. :) Cheers, JP
Comment from fictionwriter
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Sorry to hear about your computer. I hope she gets feeling better soon. I will miss you until then. I hope you're still able to post. Great job.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2010


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
    Carmen is reportedly doing very well and should be home sometime this afternoon with a new heat. Of course down here this afternoon probably means tomorrow of Friday.