What are friends for?
Two mates out on the prowl35 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Marijke,
Spectacular...fooled me you did. I thought for sure it was a guy...dressed to the nines. Never suspected that dear ole mom might be out to have agood time as well. Greatr job!
Carol
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Marijke,
Spectacular...fooled me you did. I thought for sure it was a guy...dressed to the nines. Never suspected that dear ole mom might be out to have agood time as well. Greatr job!
Carol
Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Hi Carol, thank you for your review. Originally I went for the guy thing, but thought it too obvious, thus changed it to mum. Warmest regards and hugs, Marijke
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Marijke,
Great decision on your part...adds a much stronger emotion to the story line...Carol
Comment from bookishfabler
Okay the mom thng was funny, I honestly thought she would turn out to be a guy. But the mom thing may actually be more tramatizing. LOL. This was perfect for the contest and quite fun. Good luck
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book
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Okay the mom thng was funny, I honestly thought she would turn out to be a guy. But the mom thing may actually be more tramatizing. LOL. This was perfect for the contest and quite fun. Good luck
hugs
book
Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Thank you for your review. Originally I went for the guy thing, but thought it too obvious, thus changed it to mum. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from Mariea
Well done Marijke. I like the concept of the son getting sprung by his mother - or vice versa. Dialogue and characters believeable. Well written without any clutter or spags.
Have a great day, hugs Mia
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Well done Marijke. I like the concept of the son getting sprung by his mother - or vice versa. Dialogue and characters believeable. Well written without any clutter or spags.
Have a great day, hugs Mia
Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Thanks Mia, I changed it a couple of times before I was happy with it. Let's just hope his mother was single! Warmest regards and hugs, Marijke xxxxxxxx
Comment from janicedincic
Hahaha - your sense of humour is fantastic! Well, mums these days are not matronly as in the days of old - I know some 60 year "young" mums.....
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Hahaha - your sense of humour is fantastic! Well, mums these days are not matronly as in the days of old - I know some 60 year "young" mums.....
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Yes, so do I - I'm one of them! But I do draw the line at wigs and mini-skirts! Thanks for your warm review and rating. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
lmao!
Very clever indeed! Great dialogue, very natural and drew me in and along as if I were right there with them. What a great twist at the end.
I'm sure this will do very well, if not win, the contest. Good luck to you!
::I'm still laughing::
Warm wishes
Kat
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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lmao!
Very clever indeed! Great dialogue, very natural and drew me in and along as if I were right there with them. What a great twist at the end.
I'm sure this will do very well, if not win, the contest. Good luck to you!
::I'm still laughing::
Warm wishes
Kat
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010
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Hi Kat, and thank you for your lovely review and comment. Not too sure about winning, but I enjoyed writing it. Warmest regards, Marijke
