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Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
So Peggy finally did it to herself. Looks like this book is nearing its end, and it's been a good read.
I enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Barbara,
So Peggy finally did it to herself. Looks like this book is nearing its end, and it's been a good read.
I enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Peggy will return and this book is a littl over half done.
Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from fictionwriter
Wow, I figured it was Peggy, but it's still got to hurt to have one of your team turn on you and cause problems, especailly deadly force problems. Great job
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Wow, I figured it was Peggy, but it's still got to hurt to have one of your team turn on you and cause problems, especailly deadly force problems. Great job
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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We are not finished with Peggy yet. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Joe set up a trap for Peggy and she fell for it. She was the only one who knew that Leya would be moved to Maple Street. She really fell off the deep end when she turned traitor. Even if she didn't like Leya, how could she betray her own people?
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Joe set up a trap for Peggy and she fell for it. She was the only one who knew that Leya would be moved to Maple Street. She really fell off the deep end when she turned traitor. Even if she didn't like Leya, how could she betray her own people?
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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We will see Peggy again. Thank you for your review.
Comment from L.lora
A very well written fast paced
post that is exciting from start
to finish and definitely holds
the reader's attention. Finally,
Peggy is seen for what she's been
doing, now if Leya and Steven will
admit their love to each other--
No nits or spags, great read... Lora
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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A very well written fast paced
post that is exciting from start
to finish and definitely holds
the reader's attention. Finally,
Peggy is seen for what she's been
doing, now if Leya and Steven will
admit their love to each other--
No nits or spags, great read... Lora
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. We will see Peggy again.
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Oh I was sure you weren't quite done with her yet... excellent work, though. L
Comment from knowledge
You are a fantastic story teller. This post kept me interested all the way through. So it was a successful post.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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You are a fantastic story teller. This post kept me interested all the way through. So it was a successful post.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from RebelRose
Boy, that Peggy is a piece of work, isn't she? I am so glad they caught her. I can't wait to see what happens next. Loved this chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Boy, that Peggy is a piece of work, isn't she? I am so glad they caught her. I can't wait to see what happens next. Loved this chapter.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Peggy will show up again. Thank you for your review and support.
Comment from anabelle
They finally caught her. I figured it was her from the beginning. Glad to see things will change, now. Or will they? Did someone else set her up? Oh! I just thought of that. Would be brilliant if they did.
Thanks for the lovely read.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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They finally caught her. I figured it was her from the beginning. Glad to see things will change, now. Or will they? Did someone else set her up? Oh! I just thought of that. Would be brilliant if they did.
Thanks for the lovely read.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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We will see Peggy again. Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Nice trap. Well laid. I am really pleased to see Peggy arrested, and thus a threat to Leya eliminated.
Now perhaps, Steven and Leya can get together.
I saw no spags.
Juliette
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Nice trap. Well laid. I am really pleased to see Peggy arrested, and thus a threat to Leya eliminated.
Now perhaps, Steven and Leya can get together.
I saw no spags.
Juliette
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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We will see Peggy again. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like this chapter too. The emphasis on Peggy and her jealousy served as a good conflict to drive this segment of the story. Nice indeed. cheers
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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I like this chapter too. The emphasis on Peggy and her jealousy served as a good conflict to drive this segment of the story. Nice indeed. cheers
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from ladybird
A good chapter, one with tension throughout. I'm not so sure Peggy is the mole. All the evidance points to that, but I'm not convinced. Can't wait to read the next chaper.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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A good chapter, one with tension throughout. I'm not so sure Peggy is the mole. All the evidance points to that, but I'm not convinced. Can't wait to read the next chaper.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2010
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Peggy will return. Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome.
