Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

HAHAHAHA alrighty then :-P
so what would ya have done? LOL!

anyway okay since the second part of the story is set on valentines day and the first part is just the lead up to it i'll let it go ;-)

didn't notice any spaggies or typos
thanx for sharing and good luck in contest!

shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010

Shelly, I think this guy is on his ow. He has to change his email, possibly even his address, lol. Thanks for a fun review. - John

Comment from patmedium

Excellent

John, now I am rolling in my chair. This is so funny. congratulations on a strong tale, well told. Thankyou for sharing it with us. Pat.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2010

Thanks, Pat. This one was a hoot to write. I just kept thinking..wow, how messed up would this be if it really happened, lol. - John

reply by patmedium on 12-Feb-2010

I chuckle each time I pass the picture on page one, it's been there a while now. Pat.