Invisible Friend
A childhood friend42 total reviews
Comment from stormwolf2
This is so cute, I love it. Any child would love to read this. It is so smooth and with good imagery. The rhythm and rhyme are wonderful.
The picture adds depth to your poem.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Best wishes,
Malcolm
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009
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This is so cute, I love it. Any child would love to read this. It is so smooth and with good imagery. The rhythm and rhyme are wonderful.
The picture adds depth to your poem.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Best wishes,
Malcolm
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009
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I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the great rating.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Gentlewind,
Nice little poem, it rhymes well ad has a good rhythmn. The verses evok a lovely image - I recall my kids tucked in and hugging their favourite stuffed toys as they dropped off.
Patrick
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009
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Hi Gentlewind,
Nice little poem, it rhymes well ad has a good rhythmn. The verses evok a lovely image - I recall my kids tucked in and hugging their favourite stuffed toys as they dropped off.
Patrick
Comment Written 26-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009
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I am so glad this piece brought back great memories. Thank you for the great rating.
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Hello Gentle Wind,
This is a very whimsical, well-written poem about a child's invisible friend. I'm told by my mother that I had one and that she'd have to set a plate for her at the table for me. I enjoyed this very much!
Pea
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009
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Hello Gentle Wind,
This is a very whimsical, well-written poem about a child's invisible friend. I'm told by my mother that I had one and that she'd have to set a plate for her at the table for me. I enjoyed this very much!
Pea
Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2009
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I am so glad you enjoyed this piece from my childhood. Every child should have an invisible friend. I'm glad you had one and she was well-respected! Thank you for the great rating and taking the time to read.
Comment from mrsmajor
This is a cute poem about a cute little doggie.
I lost two of my dogs last year, and my lab, Smoke, took their death very hard.
He stopped talking to us, would go and lay on his bed and sleep. We were actually afraid for his life.
It took, Smoke, months to get of their deaths. Dogs do have feelings.
Thanks for this little poem
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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This is a cute poem about a cute little doggie.
I lost two of my dogs last year, and my lab, Smoke, took their death very hard.
He stopped talking to us, would go and lay on his bed and sleep. We were actually afraid for his life.
It took, Smoke, months to get of their deaths. Dogs do have feelings.
Thanks for this little poem
Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Smoke sounds like a wonderful companion. Yes, they do have feelings. God put them on this earth to comfort us and to remind us of Him. Thank you for the great review.
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You're quite welcome, GentleWind, Indeed, God makes no mistakes, Dogs are here for many reasons, Smoke is a wonderful companion, he knows when I am feeling down, and comes over and puts his head on my lap. God Bless.
Comment from joan marie
He must have been a fine friend. I write a lot about my cats, Dillard and Dabney McFurperson. I can't imagine not having an animal or two in the house. Enjoyable read. joan marie
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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He must have been a fine friend. I write a lot about my cats, Dillard and Dabney McFurperson. I can't imagine not having an animal or two in the house. Enjoyable read. joan marie
Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Yes, she was a comfort. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Dklrdmcches
this was a very well written piece. I love the honesty within your words and the gentleness of the soothing tones. much luck to you and your writing...DKLRD
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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this was a very well written piece. I love the honesty within your words and the gentleness of the soothing tones. much luck to you and your writing...DKLRD
Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Peaches was a soothing balm and a comfort to me in time of pain. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from mermaids
This is delightful and wonderful. I like to believe the spirit of my Persian cat is with me at the end of the day.
This is a great poem that gives one comfort.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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This is delightful and wonderful. I like to believe the spirit of my Persian cat is with me at the end of the day.
This is a great poem that gives one comfort.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Peaches was of great comfort to me as a child. Now, I'm looking for a 'real' Peaches to comfort me in the present. Thank you for your great review.
Comment from AlvinTEthington
A beautiful poem. You use the aabb ccdd rhyme scheme well; because of the strong emotion in the poem, that rhyme scheme does not give the poem a lilting tone. I think in the fourth line you want the possessive day's and not the plural days. I like the parallelism of the last line very much. Good juxtaposition of picture and poem.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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A beautiful poem. You use the aabb ccdd rhyme scheme well; because of the strong emotion in the poem, that rhyme scheme does not give the poem a lilting tone. I think in the fourth line you want the possessive day's and not the plural days. I like the parallelism of the last line very much. Good juxtaposition of picture and poem.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Thank you for saying my poem is beautiful. The rhyme scheme was just there as I wrote. I appreciate the gentle correction and have corrected. Thanks for the great review and help.
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You are welcome.
Comment from MAMONIA
Cute! There has always been a love story between a master and his pet. This explains why and how. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Cute! There has always been a love story between a master and his pet. This explains why and how. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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It's even more special between a child and her furry friend. I grew up with a great love in my heart. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from BethShelby
Kids are amazing with their imaginations. Soemtines their invisable friends are children like themselves but if what they want is a pet the the friend may be a pet. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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Kids are amazing with their imaginations. Soemtines their invisable friends are children like themselves but if what they want is a pet the the friend may be a pet. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2009
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I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. My Peaches was a great comfort to me as I was growing up. Thank you for the great review.
