Comment from FredCollingwood

Excellent

I liked the way you handled the wedding stuff. I would have like to have seen a lot more mushy parts ... Not!

I looked hard for anything to suggest, but anything added or subtracted would diminish the story by that much.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009

Thank you very much for your review. I appreciate your support. Please remember I am a romance writer, so there will be some mushy stuff down the road.

reply by FredCollingwood on 24-Sep-2009

I'll stock up on my acid reflux meds.

Comment from scarletv11

Excellent

I still really like your story. I think I missed a chapter or something because I don't know why Steven married Leya. But I'll read and find out. Keep on writing.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009

Thank you for your review. Steven married Leya to keep her from an arranged marriage.

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Very strong well written chapter. Yes, I think the wedding and the way you handled it is precisely spot on..especially under the circumstances, plenty of time for things to heat up in the pressure cooker atmosphere. Good follow through and the intrique with a mole is excellent. No nits..Lora

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009

Thank you for your review. I always appreciate your comments.

Comment from darkgreennights

Excellent

You did kind of kill off our romantic hopes with that one Barb lol. But I am of an optimistic nature and am choosing to believe that Stephen is going so far overboard in the coldness direction that he is actually doth protesting etc and is really in love!
lol
Kathleen

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009

Thank you. I always appreciate reading your reviews. You could be right. Will Leya and Steven ever get it right???

reply by darkgreennights on 24-Sep-2009

lol oh dont pretend you dont know! but you could tell me lol

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009

Hey, the books finished. I know, but it's my secret. I might tell Bob, Charlie told me I can bribe him to keep a secret, but tease that he knows.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Barbara

I was hoping that you would expand a bit and at least give us the enjoyment of Leya sashaying around or maybe just one soft touch of Steven giving her a flower...something more than this. A justice of the peace and a peck on the check before goodbye.....Build me up a little before you drop me, please....

We shall see what follows.....

Carol

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009

I know, but that was the entire plan. You'll have to wait and see if Leya has anything else up her sleeve. Thank you for the review.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I like the way you have introduced questions without answers. Leya may, or may not be guilty. Good mystery and suspense. Very well written.

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009

Thank you for your review. At least you weren't upset over the wedding, some of my lady fans wanted more.

reply by c_lucas on 24-Sep-2009

You're welcome.