Tomorrow Never Comes
Time Stood Still34 total reviews
Comment from BPL76
The point of view is good
You allow us ti actually feel the sadness expressed here
The flow id good
I would change nothing here
Good Job
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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The point of view is good
You allow us ti actually feel the sadness expressed here
The flow id good
I would change nothing here
Good Job
Comment Written 21-Sep-2009
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Comment from Rain Chapman
This is really very cool. I love the idea with the international date line and the ones who don't get back their tomorrows or yesterdays. Vivid descriptions. Did you want plural knapsacks? Best of luck!
Lorraine :)
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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This is really very cool. I love the idea with the international date line and the ones who don't get back their tomorrows or yesterdays. Vivid descriptions. Did you want plural knapsacks? Best of luck!
Lorraine :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2009
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Comment from pixiemillie
A very poignant write- -and the line that brings this home: "thought back to those that would never get their tomorrow back, lost forever in the madness of war." Those rides home for so many, lost in the horror of what they have been through, what they have witnessed and friends they have lost.
thank you and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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A very poignant write- -and the line that brings this home: "thought back to those that would never get their tomorrow back, lost forever in the madness of war." Those rides home for so many, lost in the horror of what they have been through, what they have witnessed and friends they have lost.
thank you and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2009
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Comment from BJean
This said so much in such few words. Especially for those who make it back. So many sad memories, but done for a valiant reason. Beautifully portrayed. Jean
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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This said so much in such few words. Especially for those who make it back. So many sad memories, but done for a valiant reason. Beautifully portrayed. Jean
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2009
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