Tantalizing Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Chapter 1 Part 2"Dishonesty VS Love. Which will win?
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Comment from c_lucas
This is an excellent second chapter. You have my attention. Model cartels are not family oriented and would not think twice to kidnapping an ifant. Very good job.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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This is an excellent second chapter. You have my attention. Model cartels are not family oriented and would not think twice to kidnapping an ifant. Very good job.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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Thank you for your review. You are so sweet.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Chrlie
Comment from AmberRose
Hmm, interesting work. Well done. You have a nice flow and the character dialog is well done. keep up the good work and i wish you the best
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Hmm, interesting work. Well done. You have a nice flow and the character dialog is well done. keep up the good work and i wish you the best
Comment Written 02-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your reading.
Comment from RebelRose
This is another good chapter. I am anxious to see where the baby is and to see how this plays out. It is very well written and it looks like the apostrophe remains in the right place.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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This is another good chapter. I am anxious to see where the baby is and to see how this plays out. It is very well written and it looks like the apostrophe remains in the right place.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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YEA!!!!! for the apostrophe's I usually get a @ in there place. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Begin Again
Barbara
This is a difficult one for me to read, my emotions are bubbling with the missing baby. You have done an excellent job moving the story forward. Personally, I would have expressed more trauma with the discovery of the missing baby...but that's me...Ms Sappy of the Year...I enjoyed the chapter and how it is moving along.
Carol
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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Barbara
This is a difficult one for me to read, my emotions are bubbling with the missing baby. You have done an excellent job moving the story forward. Personally, I would have expressed more trauma with the discovery of the missing baby...but that's me...Ms Sappy of the Year...I enjoyed the chapter and how it is moving along.
Carol
Comment Written 02-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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I was worried about that, but the Task Force men have to pretend it isn't bothering them. Dani did have problems with it, but she is a secondary character, this time, so I tried not to make her center of attention. Because you're such a special person to me, I'll share the secret;Emily is found quickly and unharmed.
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Thank you...now I can sleep and not worry about that next chapter. LOL Take care..Carol
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Keep it our secret.
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Keep it our secret.
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Keep it our secret.
Comment from darkgreennights
Damn I knew that baby was going to be snatched. Which of course that makes the story ede of your seat good so I understand why you did it lol. see ya next chapter!
Kathleen
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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Damn I knew that baby was going to be snatched. Which of course that makes the story ede of your seat good so I understand why you did it lol. see ya next chapter!
Kathleen
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2009
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate you kind words.
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Barbara you are most welcome