CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from bard owl
Love, that percious commodity that us mortal can't seem to live without. You have concisly and very wisely used the words to convey a message about the mystery that is love. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you always, Linda
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Love, that percious commodity that us mortal can't seem to live without. You have concisly and very wisely used the words to convey a message about the mystery that is love. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you always, Linda
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from skye
Short, succinct, and using all the words required in an effective, tightly crafted, short poem.
Great artwork.
Well done.
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Short, succinct, and using all the words required in an effective, tightly crafted, short poem.
Great artwork.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from Roisin
Great job, Sue. I don't know how you managed to incorporate those words into such a short poem. It's wonderfully written and very clever. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're okay. Haven't heard from you in a while.
Hugs
Roisin
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Great job, Sue. I don't know how you managed to incorporate those words into such a short poem. It's wonderfully written and very clever. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're okay. Haven't heard from you in a while.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from honeytree
Yes sometimes or many times within our world, true love could be very hard to find these days.
The materialism within our world has grown, out of preportion.
I feel for the young growing up.
Honeytree.
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Yes sometimes or many times within our world, true love could be very hard to find these days.
The materialism within our world has grown, out of preportion.
I feel for the young growing up.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from tati
Dear friend,
I'm amazed. So many things expressed just in few words. I loved the form and flow of this poem. Its rhymes were natural, and rhythm was musical. They sound like music to me. Lovely job. It's very pleasant to read. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, tati (April 27, 2009)
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Dear friend,
I'm amazed. So many things expressed just in few words. I loved the form and flow of this poem. Its rhymes were natural, and rhythm was musical. They sound like music to me. Lovely job. It's very pleasant to read. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, tati (April 27, 2009)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
A nice and simple piece of poetry that carries a powerful message. If only humans would learn to do all the good we have learnt. kudos
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A nice and simple piece of poetry that carries a powerful message. If only humans would learn to do all the good we have learnt. kudos
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from jack silver
you used the required number of words. well done. I have always struggled to do the choosing of the number of words and put them into something that would be good enough. you did that and I enjoyed reading.
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you used the required number of words. well done. I have always struggled to do the choosing of the number of words and put them into something that would be good enough. you did that and I enjoyed reading.
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Jack
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from Judian James
Well, here you are. I was just beginning to worry about you. I hope all is well. You did it and you used a very short form to include all the words, not an easy task and make sense of it. well done.
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Well, here you are. I was just beginning to worry about you. I hope all is well. You did it and you used a very short form to include all the words, not an easy task and make sense of it. well done.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from laurelp
In just a few words you were able to convey a total story. I found no errors or spags. The poem was quite lovely. You did a very good job.
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In just a few words you were able to convey a total story. I found no errors or spags. The poem was quite lovely. You did a very good job.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009
Comment from dportwood
Great analysis of feelings in this little poem. Your use of the required words in such a short poem is remarkable. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Duane
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Great analysis of feelings in this little poem. Your use of the required words in such a short poem is remarkable. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 27-Apr-2009