Comment from glacierbabe

Excellent

Sue, this is terrific. The artwork just puts the icing on a very delicious cake. I found no errors and it met the parameters of the form used. This is very well written. Thanks for the author notes on the form. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

Comment from Dklrdmcches

Excellent

This was a well crafted poem that led to a very distinct read. great job of creating a moment in time that allows us all to be who we are. I enjoyed this poem and thank you for sharing...DKLRD

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

Comment from geetika sethi

Excellent

this is a fabulous triolet kid !
So meaningful,that it stirred up
my senses as I read along...
this is a must read for all who
cannot understand the value f their life..
it is free will since you are born..so be free always..
its all in the mind !!!
thanks for sharing such and all the best !!!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Sue....this is another excellent triolet and the third I have reviewed today. We have so many good poets here that it makes voting in these contest very difficult. Your wrote this triolet perfectly and the theme is excellent. Good luck in the contest....blessings....chey

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

Comment from rmdelta

Excellent

Sue,

a beautiful poem, my friend. It was very gentle and perfectly written, in my opinion. It is an excellent contest entry as well. Good luck

Reggie

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009

Hi Reggie! So glad you came by to pick up some coin! :-)) Thanks so much for your review. So glad you liked this one. Sue :-))

Comment from jdrhye

Excellent

Nicely articulated and beautifully written. The picture is an added interesting point of view and helps the reader to depict the depth of your message! Nicely done, enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I love your freely flowing triolet, Sue, with repeated lines that sound as if they should, indeed, be repeated and a message that is most thoughtful and rings true. This is philosopher Sue at her finest :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009

What's up with me philosophizing so much?!! HA!! I don't even have the answer to that one. I guess it's because my mind cannot stop pondering and wondering about so many things. Thanks for your very kind review, Brooke. :-))

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I've never written a Triolet
poem myself, altho I've read
quite a few - you've made a
good job of this one, my friend.

Good luck with the contest.

Margaret.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009

Margaret, with your lovely words, you would write a very nice triolet. Should give it a shot. Thanks very much for your kind review. Sue

Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea

Excellent

Good luck in the competition with this beauty, Suzie Quzie. I love it. It has a spiritual overtone and the soul lives in the undercurrent within it.

I am listening to You Tube right now... Jackson Browne's "The Pretender." Word's "Away From Me" prompted me to go listen to "Ready Or Not" and I ended up listening to this old favorite I'd forgotten about. FS is a gift. We forget so many things we loved as we "pretend" while the years fly by.

Love you,
Penny

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

How clever. You have abided by the rules and have chosen a good subject. Your write is great as is usual. Keep up the great work and good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009

Thank you so much for your lovely compliments and great review. Always appreciated! Sue :-)