CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Time Runs"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Rottie
I know how difficult this had to be. I was going to try this and pulled an absolute blank. Never skipped a beat. If the contest is not over yet, good luck! you earned it.
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I know how difficult this had to be. I was going to try this and pulled an absolute blank. Never skipped a beat. If the contest is not over yet, good luck! you earned it.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from geetika sethi
this is
story of life
unfold
great write kid...this is i guess the 3rd o r4th of your poem im reviewing today and 5's all the way !
this is unfathomable..too good..keep them coming and thanks for sharing it!
wish you great love nad luck always!
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this is
story of life
unfold
great write kid...this is i guess the 3rd o r4th of your poem im reviewing today and 5's all the way !
this is unfathomable..too good..keep them coming and thanks for sharing it!
wish you great love nad luck always!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Firefly54
I'm afraid I probably breathed to much, but you certainly have achieved fast and pacey here. Read it again after your authors not... you could do with a note at front to send people to the note first. A good one though - good luck!
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I'm afraid I probably breathed to much, but you certainly have achieved fast and pacey here. Read it again after your authors not... you could do with a note at front to send people to the note first. A good one though - good luck!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
Whilst this is cleverly done in conformity with the requirements for this format as detailed in your Notes at the end, I personally find that such a means of exression does not make for easy and pleasant reading. However, that is just my reaction to this format.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .. Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
Whilst this is cleverly done in conformity with the requirements for this format as detailed in your Notes at the end, I personally find that such a means of exression does not make for easy and pleasant reading. However, that is just my reaction to this format.
There is nothing to suggest changing and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from .. Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Yes, it is a very different format. I suppose it's for something line "free association" or something like that. Thanks so much for your very kind review. With regards, Sue
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Well, no-one had taught me about 'blitz' poetry. Even so, I did read it fast because your choice of words and prases pulled me along really quickly. This is a masterpiece of writing as is usual from your pen. Good to see you trying a new format. Well done.
Warmest wishes
Kat
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Well, no-one had taught me about 'blitz' poetry. Even so, I did read it fast because your choice of words and prases pulled me along really quickly. This is a masterpiece of writing as is usual from your pen. Good to see you trying a new format. Well done.
Warmest wishes
Kat
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Very, very, cool entry into this contest...have never written one and think I shall try! This is great in the short clips of imagery and its quick pace for reading. You have done a really nice job on this entry...good luck. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
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Very, very, cool entry into this contest...have never written one and think I shall try! This is great in the short clips of imagery and its quick pace for reading. You have done a really nice job on this entry...good luck. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2009