CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Bearing Witness"A collection of poetry
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Comment from joan marie
You have penned the reality of denial well. Often a moment of clarity sneaks through only to be thrust back into the shadows as we close our eyes to it once again. Great read. joan marie
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You have penned the reality of denial well. Often a moment of clarity sneaks through only to be thrust back into the shadows as we close our eyes to it once again. Great read. joan marie
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
Interesting.
I liked this one, but so far as I'm concerned, you can never go wrong with an open-versed piece of poetry. My only real beef with this one is that it's not so much a poem as a poetic snippet off a much larger philosophical testament. Good, but not perfect.
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Interesting.
I liked this one, but so far as I'm concerned, you can never go wrong with an open-versed piece of poetry. My only real beef with this one is that it's not so much a poem as a poetic snippet off a much larger philosophical testament. Good, but not perfect.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
Comment from rmdelta
Sue, this was a different writing to me, more of a personal one. I never understood what you were saying here, whether you meant you exposed your true feelings for a second, then pulled the curtains closed again. My bad.
Reggie
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Sue, this was a different writing to me, more of a personal one. I never understood what you were saying here, whether you meant you exposed your true feelings for a second, then pulled the curtains closed again. My bad.
Reggie
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
Comment from jaeladarling
Yet another poem I'm sure your readers can identify with! Your talents seep through yet another magnificent piece. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Cheers!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Yet another poem I'm sure your readers can identify with! Your talents seep through yet another magnificent piece. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Cheers!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Jaela, thank you again for your wonderful compliments. Your review is so much appreciated! With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Arad
sixteezkid. Nice effort.
The combination of the artwork and your poetry was especially appealing.
You've most certainly given me pause for thought though. How does what I deny give substance to my life? What do I deny? And how is that important to the rest of my life? Good questions all.
A compelling look into my soul. Thanks
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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sixteezkid. Nice effort.
The combination of the artwork and your poetry was especially appealing.
You've most certainly given me pause for thought though. How does what I deny give substance to my life? What do I deny? And how is that important to the rest of my life? Good questions all.
A compelling look into my soul. Thanks
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Arad, it is such a great feeling when my work does cause the reader to pause and reflect. That's the best review one can receive! Thank you so much. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from zocalo
I loved this poem!! I wouldn't change a thing. It really spoke to me. I'm wondering if the artwork is yours? The poem and the arwork have a great symmetry. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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I loved this poem!! I wouldn't change a thing. It really spoke to me. I'm wondering if the artwork is yours? The poem and the arwork have a great symmetry. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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zocalo, your 6 star rating is so much appreciated! Means so much, also, when someone says a work speaks to them. Your most generous review is so appreciated. Thank you! With warmest regards, Sue (p.s. - I wish the artwork was mine - ha!)
Comment from rama devi
An excellent introspective presentation with great synergy between artwork and poem. Great word economy. Strong message. No nits.
Bless you, Sue!~
Love, rd
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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An excellent introspective presentation with great synergy between artwork and poem. Great word economy. Strong message. No nits.
Bless you, Sue!~
Love, rd
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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rama devi, your excellent review means so much to me. You know how I highly respect your opinion! With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from words
We can all relate to this!
Loved the artwork you chose for this one.
Ah yes:
Not desired, but necessary...
a peek...keeping reality alive
Keeping reality alive!
As usual--you nailed it.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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We can all relate to this!
Loved the artwork you chose for this one.
Ah yes:
Not desired, but necessary...
a peek...keeping reality alive
Keeping reality alive!
As usual--you nailed it.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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words, what a great review that I appreciate so much. Thank you for all your kind compliments. With regards, Sue