CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning poet friend Sue.
Looks like you nailed the style of the Rictameter, and as well produced another good read. I enjoyed, Loyd :)
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Good morning poet friend Sue.
Looks like you nailed the style of the Rictameter, and as well produced another good read. I enjoyed, Loyd :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I enjoyed reading this simple and short poem. The message is a universal truth that is incontrovertible. I like the way you captured this truth in just a few well chosen words. kudos
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I enjoyed reading this simple and short poem. The message is a universal truth that is incontrovertible. I like the way you captured this truth in just a few well chosen words. kudos
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
You did a wonderful job in keeping within guidelines for this poem while at the same time presenting a clear message. Good luck in the contest.
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You did a wonderful job in keeping within guidelines for this poem while at the same time presenting a clear message. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2009
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Sixteezkid,
I enjoyed this Rictameter poem.
Good format, count, and word choice.
Music ... the Universal language.
This poem was a pleasure to read.
Keep writing. Regards, LateBloomer
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Hello Sixteezkid,
I enjoyed this Rictameter poem.
Good format, count, and word choice.
Music ... the Universal language.
This poem was a pleasure to read.
Keep writing. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from skye
Very good composition and use of language to write this structured poem.
I like the inner music of your words.
Nicely done.
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Very good composition and use of language to write this structured poem.
I like the inner music of your words.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from jaeladarling
Thank you for this wonderful tribute to Music! I love music of all kinds, and it's rare for me not to have something going, at least in the background. I appreciate the time you took writing this beautiful poem. It flows well, has good style and structure - everything anyone could ask for in a poem! Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Thank you for this wonderful tribute to Music! I love music of all kinds, and it's rare for me not to have something going, at least in the background. I appreciate the time you took writing this beautiful poem. It flows well, has good style and structure - everything anyone could ask for in a poem! Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from Diny
GREAT!_ I lov e the theme of music and you did well with this- Reminds me of the last piece I wrote about music I tried to discribe it without using the word music- WHEW that was hard-
the strict style here did not limit you in the least!-and I wish you luck in the contest great photo too!- Write on-Di
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GREAT!_ I lov e the theme of music and you did well with this- Reminds me of the last piece I wrote about music I tried to discribe it without using the word music- WHEW that was hard-
the strict style here did not limit you in the least!-and I wish you luck in the contest great photo too!- Write on-Di
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Being a bit of a dunce, I did not know what a Rictameter is. Now I not only know what one is, but I have yours as a perfect example of how it's done. This is a very clever (and true) piece of writing. Thanks for sharing it. All the best.
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Being a bit of a dunce, I did not know what a Rictameter is. Now I not only know what one is, but I have yours as a perfect example of how it's done. This is a very clever (and true) piece of writing. Thanks for sharing it. All the best.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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I'm a dunce, also. Never heard of a rictameter until I saw a fellow poet write in this form the other day. Right then and there, I knew that I wanted to give it a go. Love it! Can't wait to write more of them. Thank you so much for your great review and compliments! :-)) Sue
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - Don't you get tired of counting syllables? Music is the common bond among cultures. Very well said in this structured format. I liked it. Charlie
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Sue - Don't you get tired of counting syllables? Music is the common bond among cultures. Very well said in this structured format. I liked it. Charlie
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2009
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Charlie, I use my fingers up against my thumb to count syllables as I read them. I now have no fingerprints. The impossible has happened. :-)) - So glad you dug my hip poem, man. Ya in for a bit o' Zeppelin...Pearl Jam...? hee hee
Comment from Joan E.
i am right with you one this one--my husband has played the French Horn in the Palisades Symphony for 18 years, and when played well the instrument produces such sonorous tones. Music, as you said so well, "penetrates our hungry souls." I also enjoyed your musical alliteration of "c's."
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i am right with you one this one--my husband has played the French Horn in the Palisades Symphony for 18 years, and when played well the instrument produces such sonorous tones. Music, as you said so well, "penetrates our hungry souls." I also enjoyed your musical alliteration of "c's."
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009