CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 89 "Family Matters"A collection of poetry
48 total reviews
Comment from babylonia
why? because life isn't always neat and simple. there are cracks. ouch. easy to read grammatically. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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why? because life isn't always neat and simple. there are cracks. ouch. easy to read grammatically. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Life never is neat and simple. But one does wonder what someone is chasing when they have all that is the prize in life; a family. Referring to, of course: abuse, neglect and betrayal (which this one is about). Other just don't work out for many other reasons. Thanks very much for your review and compliments! :-)) Sue
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sue,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - That stings but so true at times. Some parents should never be allowed to have children. Nice story in twelve words. I enjoyed it. Charlie
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Sue - That stings but so true at times. Some parents should never be allowed to have children. Nice story in twelve words. I enjoyed it. Charlie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Amen to that! Not quite sure what they want outta life. Hence, the big WHY? Thank you very much, Charlie for your review. Always appreciated. :-)) Sue
Comment from amada
This is a great contest for this fabulous contest. It tells the sad story of many families, from two points of view. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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This is a great contest for this fabulous contest. It tells the sad story of many families, from two points of view. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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amada, I really appreciate your read and your excellent review. Very much appreciated. Sue
Comment from adewpearl
wow, your two statements sure connect in a profound and meaningful way - I love the use of the question, for who can possibly understand this as often as it happens? Perfect illustration, too.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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wow, your two statements sure connect in a profound and meaningful way - I love the use of the question, for who can possibly understand this as often as it happens? Perfect illustration, too.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Brooke, so glad you liked this work. Thank you for your review with such kind compliments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Minglement
Oh, this is excellent. You've done a beautiful job of juxtaposing the elements, of good and bad and illustrated it perfectly. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Oh, this is excellent. You've done a beautiful job of juxtaposing the elements, of good and bad and illustrated it perfectly. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Marcia, thank you very much for your great review and compliments. Always appreciated, Sue
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You are so welcome! Have a great week. Marcia
Comment from lizperkins
Wow. That was a powerful message. I don't know what to say. So much emotion packed in those 12 little words. This contest has brought out some real talent. Thanks for sharing. EL
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Wow. That was a powerful message. I don't know what to say. So much emotion packed in those 12 little words. This contest has brought out some real talent. Thanks for sharing. EL
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Yes, there is a lot of good talent in this contest. Thank you very much for your review. I really appreciate it. Sue
Comment from pabelk
What powerful twelve words. You captured it all. The stark differences and yet some how related makes this a scary world.
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What powerful twelve words. You captured it all. The stark differences and yet some how related makes this a scary world.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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pabelk, Thank you very much for your great review. And for your compliment! With regards, Sue
Comment from Karen B.
A powerful pair of six-worders here, a sad statement on how things too often are. Meets the contest requirements, good luck in the voting booth! Karen
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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A powerful pair of six-worders here, a sad statement on how things too often are. Meets the contest requirements, good luck in the voting booth! Karen
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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nana_k, Thank you very much for your review and such great compliments! Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Wow, you did an excellent job with this. Two separate stories and yet, they can run parallel with each other. I found no errors. Good luck. I think you've got a winner here.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Wow, you did an excellent job with this. Two separate stories and yet, they can run parallel with each other. I found no errors. Good luck. I think you've got a winner here.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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What a great review, El Gato. And I thank you for it. And for the great compliments! So glad you liked it. :-)) Sue
Comment from DreamChaser
Great entry for this contest. Both sentences have powerful meanings. I like the way you made them with such different emotions, each one strong. Nice work.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Great entry for this contest. Both sentences have powerful meanings. I like the way you made them with such different emotions, each one strong. Nice work.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Dreamchaser, thank you for your compliments. Very encouraging! All the best to you, Sue