CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 137 "Surf's Up!"A collection of poetry
36 total reviews
Comment from dportwood
Sixteeakid,
Your tyburn is perfectly rhymed and constructed. Good imagery and a very pleasant read. Lots of luck in the contest.
Duane
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Sixteeakid,
Your tyburn is perfectly rhymed and constructed. Good imagery and a very pleasant read. Lots of luck in the contest.
Duane
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thanks for your review, Duane. Really appreciated! And thanks for your well-wishes for the contest. Regards, Sue
Comment from sara-beth
Very cute, and a nice thought for those of us who are freezing our you-know-what's off! The picture also, is cute. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Very cute, and a nice thought for those of us who are freezing our you-know-what's off! The picture also, is cute. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thank you very much for your very kind review and comments! With regards, Sue
Comment from Josipher32
This was a corectly written tyburn poem. You followed the format the way it was supposed to be written. Fun picture choice.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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This was a corectly written tyburn poem. You followed the format the way it was supposed to be written. Fun picture choice.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Josipher, thanks for your very kind review! Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from AbigailDavid
Hello, great poem for the Tyburn challenge. I liked this poem, it is fun, and reads with a fast rhythm. I noticed nothing that needed changing, and thanks for sharing your poetry, cheers, abby
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Hello, great poem for the Tyburn challenge. I liked this poem, it is fun, and reads with a fast rhythm. I noticed nothing that needed changing, and thanks for sharing your poetry, cheers, abby
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
Comment from Winslow
Dear Sixteen,
Somehow this doesn't do it for me. Why the list of words at the beginning? Too many ing words and their repeat make this a jarring read. I'd leave off the four first words. Your picture is great and the colors sunny.
Regards,
Winslow
This is not my favorite format. I don't like the repetition. Is it required that the words repeat? Yours, based upon the example for the contest, fulfills the requirements and I admit is a cheery read. I guess I won't be voting in this contest. (LOL) Inclusion of the Tyburn description is good. I was going to write you when I read another one and realized it was probably the required form.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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Dear Sixteen,
Somehow this doesn't do it for me. Why the list of words at the beginning? Too many ing words and their repeat make this a jarring read. I'd leave off the four first words. Your picture is great and the colors sunny.
Regards,
Winslow
This is not my favorite format. I don't like the repetition. Is it required that the words repeat? Yours, based upon the example for the contest, fulfills the requirements and I admit is a cheery read. I guess I won't be voting in this contest. (LOL) Inclusion of the Tyburn description is good. I was going to write you when I read another one and realized it was probably the required form.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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Winslow, I did this format because the contest requires it to be so. It's a "Tyburn" format (but, I forgot to include that description on the bottom, which I will do now). Maybe a re-visit after you read about the contest? Thanks so much reading! Regards, Sue
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Hey Winslow, thanks for the re-visit! I should have posted the contest format, but forgot. I keep entering these contests because I'm so new at writing and I know nothing of these weird names like "senryu" or "naani", etc. But it is a challenge indeed! Really appreciate your generous review. Most sincerely, Sue
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Dear Sue,
Your entry for the naani contest was fantastic. Very clever. you are easily going to win that contest. Congratulations.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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I've got to go visit the voting booths to see what's happening! Thanks for your wonderful encouragement!!
Most sincerely,
Sue
Comment from ulster3
Hello Sixteezkid.
Very excellent. Good luck to you. I think you'll do very well...seems like a winner to me.
fondly, rebecca
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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Hello Sixteezkid.
Very excellent. Good luck to you. I think you'll do very well...seems like a winner to me.
fondly, rebecca
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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Awesome review, ulster. Thanks so much! For some reason, I'm a glutton for punishment to enter these contests! Ha! Only way to learn, though. Much appreciated and with regards, Sue
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Awesome review, ulster. Thanks so much! For some reason, I'm a glutton for punishment to enter these contests! Ha! Only way to learn, though. Much appreciated and with regards, Sue
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Awesome review, ulster. Thanks so much! For some reason, I'm a glutton for punishment to enter these contests! Ha! Only way to learn, though. Much appreciated and with regards, Sue
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Awesome review, ulster. Thanks so much! For some reason, I'm a glutton for punishment to enter these contests! Ha! Only way to learn, though. Much appreciated and with regards, Sue
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Sorry about FOUR responses. There was a 'glitch' on the site! Ha!