CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 142 "In Shatters"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Lois Delaney
Very good poem, Sixteenzkid. You sure are blooming here on Fanstory. So glad you joined our wonderful group of writers. You fit in like a hot cup of coffee. Blessings my dear one.
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Very good poem, Sixteenzkid. You sure are blooming here on Fanstory. So glad you joined our wonderful group of writers. You fit in like a hot cup of coffee. Blessings my dear one.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hooray! Exquisite! Filled with succint visual imagery. Your thoughts and words flow magically. You are definitely hooked on these, my friend! Aren't they just marvelous! diane
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Hooray! Exquisite! Filled with succint visual imagery. Your thoughts and words flow magically. You are definitely hooked on these, my friend! Aren't they just marvelous! diane
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Mrs. KT, I am SO glad you liked it! Yes, I am now "HOOKED ON TETRACYS" - Ha! With so much encouragement from you, also. Love the disciplines and confinements to really make me stretchhhhhhhhhhhh! I am so humbled by your most gracious rating of those (rare and precious) 6's! Ha! Means so much for someone to enjoy your work. And thank you for all your kind words. Very much appreciated and with my warmest regards, Sue
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Again, well-deserved! If you get a moment, please read "To Capture Her Essence" in my portfolio. It is one of many, but also one of my favorite! Best Wishes..diane
Comment from Gramma Kathy
Truly exceptional! I love the way you made this poetry form work for you. The mirror image adds to the power of your message.
After all, the words we use to wound often return to wound us, don't they.
I am SO impressed!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Truly exceptional! I love the way you made this poetry form work for you. The mirror image adds to the power of your message.
After all, the words we use to wound often return to wound us, don't they.
I am SO impressed!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Gramma Kathy, I am so humbled with your most kind "words"! And to receive this BONUS review keeps me so encouraged. From my heart, I appreciate it. Am so glad you enjoyed this piece. Have a lovely Thanksgiving. With my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Artasylum
i love all of the emerging styles and must try this one as well it is fun and you did a superb job at this thanks...yours, diana
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i love all of the emerging styles and must try this one as well it is fun and you did a superb job at this thanks...yours, diana
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Lynar
I enjoyed the message that made me think. The words that are cruel spoken, can cause major damage. It's always best to shun or think before you speak anything that is hurtful to another person. Your poetic form I am not familiar with but was enhancing. (shards may be removed but still burn and agitate). A superb reminder. Wonderful was the artwork that was a perfect match. I would recommend it to my friends. No adverse remarks. Excellent.
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I enjoyed the message that made me think. The words that are cruel spoken, can cause major damage. It's always best to shun or think before you speak anything that is hurtful to another person. Your poetic form I am not familiar with but was enhancing. (shards may be removed but still burn and agitate). A superb reminder. Wonderful was the artwork that was a perfect match. I would recommend it to my friends. No adverse remarks. Excellent.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is a first-rate piece
of freeverse, cleverly thought out,
with a smooth flow to the words..
complemented by an appropriate
picture.
A pleasure to review,
Margaret.
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This is a first-rate piece
of freeverse, cleverly thought out,
with a smooth flow to the words..
complemented by an appropriate
picture.
A pleasure to review,
Margaret.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from Penpal
Very good job with this form of poetry. I especially liked your theme, and how you managed to powerfully convey your thoughts on it. Great job.
Pen
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Very good job with this form of poetry. I especially liked your theme, and how you managed to powerfully convey your thoughts on it. Great job.
Pen
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from ledford
So true:-) Words are our worst weapon; they do so much harm.
"shards may be removed, yet the burn still seethes." great line!
Keep up the good work!
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So true:-) Words are our worst weapon; they do so much harm.
"shards may be removed, yet the burn still seethes." great line!
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from sara-beth
Truer words were never spoken. Great job, and what a message, I should let a few people that I know read this, not that they would get it. Anyway, I like this form of poetry, it is so straight to the point. Awesome.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Truer words were never spoken. Great job, and what a message, I should let a few people that I know read this, not that they would get it. Anyway, I like this form of poetry, it is so straight to the point. Awesome.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Sarah-beth....I am now LOL!! It's just the way you said there are a few people you want to have read this (and they wouldn't get it)!! We must laugh sometimes to help us get through it all! And feel free to just slip this little poem under their noses!
Yes, how those words can sting. I'm so glad you liked this work. Thank you very much for your very generous review and comments. Most sincerely, Sue
Comment from The Unlikely author
this is a good reminder to us all that once the words are out there....they are not coming back. I have been accused more than once of having a mouth that operates at twice the speed of my brain. I hope people sit back and absorb your words.
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this is a good reminder to us all that once the words are out there....they are not coming back. I have been accused more than once of having a mouth that operates at twice the speed of my brain. I hope people sit back and absorb your words.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008