The Kirby Case - Part 1
A detective attempts to find a serial killer34 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
An interesting and well written piece of poetry. Telling the story through a poem is a different approach but keep on going. I am looking forward to the next instalments.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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An interesting and well written piece of poetry. Telling the story through a poem is a different approach but keep on going. I am looking forward to the next instalments.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from bob cullen
You sure know how to leave the reader hanging. A very intriguing read. Is this actually a factual case, or just a piece of fiction. I can't wait to read the next verse. Like i say, most intriguing.
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You sure know how to leave the reader hanging. A very intriguing read. Is this actually a factual case, or just a piece of fiction. I can't wait to read the next verse. Like i say, most intriguing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem draws me right into the Kirby case! I admire how you have a wonderfully crafted poem that is also a detective story - it's such a unique approach. The rhymes flow so well. You've done a fantastic job building tension and painting a clear picture of the detective's challenges. It's impossible to look away from! Great work!
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Your poem draws me right into the Kirby case! I admire how you have a wonderfully crafted poem that is also a detective story - it's such a unique approach. The rhymes flow so well. You've done a fantastic job building tension and painting a clear picture of the detective's challenges. It's impossible to look away from! Great work!
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Pam,
Your story poem is about an unfortunate occurrence around the world and in the U.S. mass murder is such a horrible phenomenon; your words reflect its gravity and depravity.
Excellent work, Pam.
Good luck with your story.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Pam,
Your story poem is about an unfortunate occurrence around the world and in the U.S. mass murder is such a horrible phenomenon; your words reflect its gravity and depravity.
Excellent work, Pam.
Good luck with your story.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
