Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Patch and Ruby, Catching Things"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from Pam (respa)
Nice images and presentation, Debi. Your notes are appreciated, and I'm glad Helen doesn't have the flu. You did a good job with the poem and viewpoints of the cats. Effective imagery and rhyme.
It is like they are children worrying about their parents. They don't want to cause any trouble or make their human sick. Each one comes up with an idea about how they will offer protection from getting sick. They also want to figure out what is troubling their humans and what they can do about that. Ruby had a good idea that all things were bad to catch. There are good things, too. A very good concluding verse. Very well done, and have a great 2025!!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Nice images and presentation, Debi. Your notes are appreciated, and I'm glad Helen doesn't have the flu. You did a good job with the poem and viewpoints of the cats. Effective imagery and rhyme.
It is like they are children worrying about their parents. They don't want to cause any trouble or make their human sick. Each one comes up with an idea about how they will offer protection from getting sick. They also want to figure out what is troubling their humans and what they can do about that. Ruby had a good idea that all things were bad to catch. There are good things, too. A very good concluding verse. Very well done, and have a great 2025!!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Dearest Pam, I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and always detailed comments. You are so special. I appreciate so very much your six lovely stars and you. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Debi. I appreciate your reply, and you, my friend😊
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Debi,
You always write some stellar poems. This cat one is cute and I like how these three cats are friends. The picture you chose is adorable.
I hope you have a wonderful New Year.
Great job my friend I hope you are doing well.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Debi,
You always write some stellar poems. This cat one is cute and I like how these three cats are friends. The picture you chose is adorable.
I hope you have a wonderful New Year.
Great job my friend I hope you are doing well.
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dear Cecilia, I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and comments. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
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You're welcome
Comment from jmdg1954
Well I'm glad to hear that Helen in fact is not under the weather with the flu!
Next, this trio of cats are a rowdy rambunctious bunch (say that three times fast). But they've learned their lesson it seems and have calmed down.
Your post is a nice way to start my day... with a smile.
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers, sis and a big meow to you...
John
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Well I'm glad to hear that Helen in fact is not under the weather with the flu!
Next, this trio of cats are a rowdy rambunctious bunch (say that three times fast). But they've learned their lesson it seems and have calmed down.
Your post is a nice way to start my day... with a smile.
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers, sis and a big meow to you...
John
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dear John, yes, all this over the misunderstanding of the word catch.
I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and comments. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Rick Gardner
Have to love the cats in our lives, they live in their own life. We were never meant to truly understand them. As a Veterinarian, I treated, saved many, some said thank you, others said up yours.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Have to love the cats in our lives, they live in their own life. We were never meant to truly understand them. As a Veterinarian, I treated, saved many, some said thank you, others said up yours.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dear Rick, yes, it is one thing to be a veterinarian and another to do like I do in my silly cat poems and that is to let three silly cats misconstrue the English language. LOL.
I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and comments. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This composition about cats Ruby, Patch, and Pepina in poetic format is a fun share here. I guess the word 'catch' or 'catchall phrase' comes to mind, with 13 uses of the word 'catch' or 'catching' or 'catches' or 'caught.' I guess you could even add a stanza another time and use the word 'catchup,' although perhaps more of us use 'ketchup' instead. Thanks for letting us 'catch up' with what the three funny cats are doing (I assume they don't start Skype up by themselves, ha ha.)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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This composition about cats Ruby, Patch, and Pepina in poetic format is a fun share here. I guess the word 'catch' or 'catchall phrase' comes to mind, with 13 uses of the word 'catch' or 'catching' or 'catches' or 'caught.' I guess you could even add a stanza another time and use the word 'catchup,' although perhaps more of us use 'ketchup' instead. Thanks for letting us 'catch up' with what the three funny cats are doing (I assume they don't start Skype up by themselves, ha ha.)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dear Crystie, I love the fact that you always pay attention to detail so nicely. I do appreciate you so very much.
I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and comments. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from kahpot
Gorgeous photo, cats are very clever, though mighty independent they do know where their home is, what a wonderful use of the word "catch" in its many meanings, very well written and presented****kahpot
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Gorgeous photo, cats are very clever, though mighty independent they do know where their home is, what a wonderful use of the word "catch" in its many meanings, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dear Kahpot, I love the fact that you always pay attention to detail so nicely.
I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and comments. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sanku
What a picture,Debi .I am a diehard fan of catts .In my apts we are not allowed to keep cats. This was a very funny poem, three cats discussing about thier catches. enjoyed reading this ..
Do you have a cat?
what news about Wayne?Will his operation be soon?
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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What a picture,Debi .I am a diehard fan of catts .In my apts we are not allowed to keep cats. This was a very funny poem, three cats discussing about thier catches. enjoyed reading this ..
Do you have a cat?
what news about Wayne?Will his operation be soon?
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi Santha, no, I do not have a cat but would love one. I am so sorry you aren't able to have one. And yes, sweetie, Wayne is coming home today or tomorrow. No operation as they think it will take care of it itself.
I love the fact that you always pay attention to detail so nicely.
I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and comments. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sara J1
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was a nice surprise like a warm summer day. It made me smile and chuckle a little, which always makes for a good read. Keep writing.
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was a nice surprise like a warm summer day. It made me smile and chuckle a little, which always makes for a good read. Keep writing.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dear Sara, I love the fact that you paid attention to detail so nicely.
I can't thank you enough for the very kind review and comments. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
Well, that's what we want "teachable" cats! I thought that picture was cute and was surprised that there were three cats but now I know that you included Pepina, too! So cute! And I liked the way you showed us how in English we use "catch" in lots of ways!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Well, that's what we want "teachable" cats! I thought that picture was cute and was surprised that there were three cats but now I know that you included Pepina, too! So cute! And I liked the way you showed us how in English we use "catch" in lots of ways!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Hi Helen, I can't thank you enough for the always kind review and comments for your Patch and Kenzie's Ruby. I don't know why I feel the need to keep doing them, but as long as you don't mind, they are fun. You make them more special. I appreciate so very much your six lovely stars.
Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
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Patch so thrilled you remember her !! 💖
