Happy BirthDay Debi
rhymed verses36 total reviews
Comment from docsoc
Rhyming couplets are great when writing birthday greetings. I think your verses with four lines in each works very well. The mood is cheerful. I wonder if you use 'smile' in the second verse, would you get a better rhyme going. What do you think?
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Rhyming couplets are great when writing birthday greetings. I think your verses with four lines in each works very well. The mood is cheerful. I wonder if you use 'smile' in the second verse, would you get a better rhyme going. What do you think?
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much...
Comment from GWHARGIS
The Fanstory welcome wagon is having a birthday. That is good to know. I might have to write something for her myself. I really enjoyed your poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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The Fanstory welcome wagon is having a birthday. That is good to know. I might have to write something for her myself. I really enjoyed your poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you Gretchen .I am going through a bit Flu attack thats why my reply was late I ambehind in my reading too.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful offering for someone whose pen does bring such enjoyment to many here... Thanx so much, Sanku, for sharing a bit of that joy back to her! ;)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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What a wonderful offering for someone whose pen does bring such enjoyment to many here... Thanx so much, Sanku, for sharing a bit of that joy back to her! ;)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to our sweet angel who consistently remembers our birthdays. I will surely PM her and wish her a special birthday with. You've done us a great service by doing this.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to our sweet angel who consistently remembers our birthdays. I will surely PM her and wish her a special birthday with. You've done us a great service by doing this.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much..
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully done and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I do want to wish our very own Debi Marquette a very beautiful birthday. Happy Birthday!
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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This is beautifully done and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I do want to wish our very own Debi Marquette a very beautiful birthday. Happy Birthday!
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thankyou very much
Comment from gansach
A very nice birthday tribute poem to the Queen of Tribute Poems herself. Debi so generously spends her time penning cheerful birthday and other event poems for all the FanStory friends, it's only right to return the favor. Wonderful job!
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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A very nice birthday tribute poem to the Queen of Tribute Poems herself. Debi so generously spends her time penning cheerful birthday and other event poems for all the FanStory friends, it's only right to return the favor. Wonderful job!
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much...
